afton

ROBERT BURNS

Afton Water

The source of the Afton Water is found on the slopes of Alwhat Hill in the south of the parish of New Cumnock. It flows due north for some eight miles through the delightful Glen Afton until it meets with the River Nith at the comunn ach (cumnock) , 'the place of the confluence'. This little river is famous the world over thanks to Robert Burns' wonderful work 'Sweet Afton', and many townships or communties particularly in the USA, carry this name.

'Sweet Afton' first came to light in a letter that the bard wrote to Mrs Francis Dunlop, his patron and acquaintance, on the 5th February 1789. 'There is a small river, Afton, that falls into the Nith, near New Cumnock, which has some charming, wild, romantic scenery on its banks.

Sadly in his letter, Burns gave no indication as to where he composed his praises to the Sweet Afton. Naturally, local folk-lore can no look no further than the vicinity of the Afton as the obvious place to write such an accurate description of the environs. One local tradition, related by A.M.Boyle, suggests that Burns had composed his work on the way back to a local inn from the Laight, home to his friend John Logan. No merriment that night as Burns retired to his room immediately and in the morning sent a servant with a draft of his work back to the Logans at Laight. Chris Rollie, promotes the more plausible local tradition, that Burns, completed his work whilst visiting Logan at Laight, speculating that he may have done so under the trysting thorn at the Laight.

The identity of Mary in Sweet Afton, also remains a mystery. Gilbert Burns, the poet's brother, believed that it was Mary Campbell (Highland Mary) who worked as a dairy maid at the Coilsfield House. This grand mansion stood on the banks of the Water of Fail, a small tributary of the River Ayr. Here too, a trysting thorn appears in local Burns-lore, for Highland Mary and Rabbie would regualrly meet under the branches of Mary's thorn. Gilbert also believed that the song Sweet Afton was really a tribute to the River Ayr, where Rabbie had simply transposed the names of the two rivers, as he was known to do in some of his other works. However, Rabbie's letter to Mrs Dunlop, dispels the notion that the River Ayr was ever the inspiration for Sweet Afton, and therefore it seems reasonable to look closer to home for an Afton Mary . Step forward, Mary Murdoch cousin of Martha McAdam, wife to John Logan of Laight. A servant in the neighbouring farm of Ashmark, overlooking the lofty hills and green braes of Glen Afton .

FLOW gently, sweet Afton! among thy green braes,
Flow gently, I'll sing thee a song in thy praise;
My Mary's asleep by thy murmuring stream,
Flow gently, sweet Afton, disturb not her dream.

Thou stock-dove whose echo resounds thro' the glen,
Ye wild whistling blackbirds, in yon thorny den,
Thou green-crested lapwing thy screaming forbear,
I charge you, disturb not my slumbering Fair.

How lofty, sweet Afton, thy neighbouring hills,
Far mark'd with the course of clear, winding rills;
There daily I wander as noon rises high,
My flocks and my Mary's sweet cot in my eye.
How pleasant thy banks and green valleys below,
Where, wild in the woodlands, the primroses blow;
There oft, as mild Ev'ning weeps over the lea,
The sweet-scented birk shades my Mary and me.

Thy crystal stream, Afton, how lovely it glides,
And winds by the cot where my Mary resides;
How wanton thy waters her snowy feet lave,
As, gathering sweet flowerets, she stems thy clear wave.

Flow gently, sweet Afton! among thy green braes,
Flow gently, sweet river, the them of my lays;
My Mary's asleep by thy murmuring stream,
Flow gently, sweet Afton, disturb not her dream.