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61. Both Ray Bradbury and Jamaica Kincaid
says that they’re childhoods were happy loving and remarkable.
61. Both Ray Bradbury
and Jamaica Kincaid say that their childhoods were happy, loving, and remarkable.
62. Both have also choosed to write stories about childhood; and its quite possable that them stories were took from real memorys.
62. Both have also chosen to write stories about childhood, and it’s quite possible that those stories were taken from real memories.
63. Kincaids first
published short story, Girl, and her first novel, Annie John, explores the
relationship among mothers and daughters.
63. Kincaid’s first published short story, “Girl,” and her first novel, Annie John, explore the relationship between
mothers and daughters.
64. Ive read Annie John; its most
straightforward than her collection of stories At the bottom of the river.
64.
I’ve
read Annie John; it’s more
straightforward than her collection of stories At the Bottom of the River.
65. Ray Bradbury is a science fiction writer whom was born on august 22 1920 in Waukegan Illinois.
66. When Langston Hughes was eighteen, he wrote one of his most
famous poems, “The Negro Speaks of Rivers.” 67. Hughes became a prominant writer and the first african american to
earn their living from writing, but he didn’t never make much money. 67. Hughes became a prominent writer and the first African American
to earn his living from writing, but he never made much money. 68. When Hughes teached young writers he would tell them to explore
your own families neighborhoods and cities 68. When Hughes taught young
writers, he would tell them to explore their own families, neighborhoods, and cities. 69. He said that if writers learn that lesson good, they
can influance others, their world become everybodys world. 69. He said that if writers learn that lesson well, they can influence others; their world becomes everybody’s world.
70. Most of his work explore the experiance of ordinary African
Americans, his short stories about Jesse B. Semple is the good example.
70. Most of his work explores
the experience of ordinary African
Americans; his short stories about Jesse
B. Semple are good examples.
71. One of the most oldest recorded monsters
are Humbaba, Humbaba appears in The Epic of Gilgamesh, wich dates back
to 2000 b.c.
71. One of the oldest
recorded monsters is Humbaba. Humbaba appears in The Epic of Gilgamesh, which
dates back to 2000 B.C. 72. The
warrior Yorimasa aimed good and killed the monster, which had a monkeys head a
snakes tail and a tigers paws. 72. The warrior
Yorimasa aimed well and killed the monster, which had a monkey’s head, a snake’s
tail, and a tiger’s paws. 73. I admitt
I used to think Frankenstein was the monster but he was the scientist who brung
the monster to life and fleed from his creation.
73. I admit I used
to think Frankenstein was the monster, but he was the scientist who brought the
monster to life and fled from his creation.
74. In most of Stephen
Kings’ novels the monsters are monstrous humans, however, It is an
exception.
65. Ray Bradbury is a science fiction
writer who was born on August 22,
1920, in Waukegan, Illinois.
66.
When langston hughes was eighteen he wrote one of his most famous poems The Negro
speaks of Rivers.
74. In most of Stephen King’s novels, the monsters are monstrous humans; however, It is an exception.
75. There are assuredly many monsters in his stories, in “The Mist” for instance a giant spider don’t hesitate to munch on humans.
75. There are
assuredly many monsters in his stories; in “The Mist,” for instance, a giant
spider doesn’t hesitate to munch on humans.