Topic: Creative Writing 04-05
Dreams can be the enemy.
They creep into your head
when you are indefensive.
They fill your mind
with vivid color
and bright ideas
only to awake
to a darker world.
Others take your peace
and throw in a turbulent sea
or a scenery
of rain and dark forests
or in front of an individual
with a murder weapon.
Yes, you do awake
to learn it was just a nightmare,
but you jump
at any little sound around you.
The worst dreams,
yes, worst enemies
are y
those that take you
to a world
that has all the success
just waiting for you
to inhale it.
You breathe
and become
all you ever wanted
to become,
you acquire
everything you ever
wanted to have...
then you awake
with the pinch
of reality,
and sometimes you wish
you weren't breathing
at all.

Topic: Creative Writing 04-05
I am a fish in the ocean.
The world around me
is so immense
that I get frightened;
yet, I swim on.
Some places in my ocean
are warm and radiant.
Others don't get enough sin,
so they are cold, dark
and less inhabited
I see fish that travel in groups,
I prefer to swim alone
I must hide or even run
from bigger fish
Yet must prey on inferior
organisms in order to survive
I must watch out
for all the nets thrown in my ocean
they are abundant and subtle
but they only lead to death
sometimes the turbulent waves
wash me up on shore
I grope for water
and jump in despair
but i always manage
to return to my immense
and frighting ocean.

Intro
Topic: Creative Writing 04-05
Hey Guys!

I really look forward to a year of great writing, but also of great improvement. That is why I want to ask every single one of you to take a moment not only to read my writing, but also to comment on it and strongly critique it. Give me feedback on how I can improve in order to make my writing stronger. I'm looking forward to all your help, don't be bashfull!
Your bud-e,
Nathaly Ceron Sarmiento