if you drank a little less you might have been a bit smarter
you have a good edge, but its not razor sharp
editors are scum
why i don't know
they just are
its very hard to tell good and bad poems
tho a very good one
one can have an immediate sense of
i don't rely on my immediate feeling about a poem
but let some time go by
and usually always i include them
on the basis
i am a genius
and anything even dribble from my hands is ok
and actually the crowd has no taste
so a bad poem is likely to be more popular
can't lose really
except for the time gone
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the above was a reply to:
this is great, I just wrote two
poems I didn't like.
there is a trash can on this
computer.
I just moved the poems
over
and dropped them into
the trash can.
they're gone forever, no
paper, no sound, no
fury, no placenta
and then
just a clean screen
awaits you.
it's always better
to reject yourself before
the editors do.
especially on a rainy
night like this with
bad music on the radio.
and now--
I know what you're
thinking:
maybe he should have
trashed this
misbegotten one
also.
ha, ha, ha,
ha.