eileen writes :




i


saw


it


all


'twas


pre


ordained


the


tearing


up


of


this


love


so


stained




already


ragged


now


too


care


worn


how


else


could


i


end


up


but


forlorn







my


 reply :





i think love always rips us apart


regardless


in


it's


imagined


presence


or


  absence !