HOW TO WRITE PROFITABLE CLASSIFIED ADS
Everybody wants to make more money... In fact, most people would
like to hit upon something that
makes them fabulously rich! And seemingly, one of the easiest roads
to the fulfillment of these dreams
of wealth is mail order or within the professional
circles of the business, direct mail selling...
The only thing is, hardly anyone gives much real thought to the
basic ingredient of selling by mail - the
writing of profitable classified ads. If your mail order business
is to succeed, then you must acquire
the expertise of writing classified ads that sell your product or services!
So what makes a classified ad good or bad? First of all, it must
appeal to the reader, and as such, it
must say exactly what you want it to say. Secondly, it has to
say what it says in the least possible
number of words in order to keep your operating costs within
your budget. And thirdly, it has to
produce the desired results whether inquiries or sales.
Grabbing the reader's attention is your first objective. You must
assume the reader is "scanning" the
page on which your ad appears in the company of two or three
hundred classified ads. Therefore,
there has to be something about your ad that causes him to stop
scanning and look at yours! So, the
first two or three words of your ad are of
the utmost importance and deserve your careful
consideration. Most surveys show that words or phrases that quickly
involve the reader, tend to be
the best attention-grabbers. Such words
as: FREE... WIN... MAKE BIG MONEY...
Whatever words you use as attention-grabbers, to start your ads,
you should bear in mind that they'll
be competing with similar attention-grabbers of the other
ads on the same page. Therefore, in
addition to your lead words, your ad must quickly go on to promise
or state further benefits to the
reader. In other words, your ad might read something like
this: MAKE BIG MONEY! Easy &
Simple. We show you how!
In the language of professional copywriters, you've grabbed
the attention of your prospect, and
interested him with something that even he can do.
The next rule of good classified copywriting has to do with the
arousal of the reader's desire to get in
on your offer. In a great many instances, this rule is by-passed,
and it appears, this is the real reason
that an ad doesn't pull according to the expectations of the advertiser.
Think about it - you've got your reader's attention; you've told
him it's easy and simple; and you're
about to ask him to do something. Unless you take the time to
further "want your offer," your ad is
going to only half turn him on. He'll compare your ad with the
others that have grabbed his attention
and finally decide upon the one that interests him the most.
What I'm saying is that here is the place for you to insert that
magic word "guaranteed" or some other
such word or phrase. So now, we've got an ad that reads: MAKE
BIG MONEY! Easy & Simple.
Guaranteed!
Now the reader is turned on, and in his mind, he can't lose. You're
ready to ask for his money. This
is the "demand for action" part of your ad. This is the part
where you want to use such words as:
Limited offer - Act now! Write today! Only and/or just...
Putting it all together, then your ad might read something like
this: MAKE BIG MONEY! Easy &
Simple. Guaranteed! Limited offer. Send $l to:
These are the ingredients of any good classified ad - Attention
- Interest - Desire - Action... Without
these four ingredients skillfully integrated into your ad, chances
are your ad will just "lie there" and not
do anything but cost you money. What we've just shown you is
a basic classified ad. Although such
an ad could be placed in any leading publication and would pull
a good response, it's known as a
"blind ad" and would pull inquiries and responses from
a whole spectrum of people reading the
publication in which it appeared. In other words, from as many
"time-wasters" as from bona fide
buyers.
So let's try to give you an example of the kind of classified
ad you might want to use, say to sell a
report such as this one... Using all the rules of basic advertising
copywriting, and stating exactly what
our product is, our ad reads thusly:
MONEY-MAKER'S SECRETS! How To Write winning classified
ads. Simple & easy to learn -should double or triple your
responses. Rush $1 to BC Sales, 10 Main Anytown, TX 75001
The point we're making is that: l) You've got to
grab the reader's attention... 2) You've got to
"interest him" with something that appeals to him... 3)
You've got to "further stimulate" him with
something (catch-phrase) that makes him "desire" the product
or service... 4) Demand that he act
immediately...
There's no point in being tricky or clever. Just adhere
to the basics and your profits will increase
accordingly. One of the best ways of learning to write good classified
ads is to study the classifieds -
try to figure out exactly what they're attempting to sell - and
then practice rewriting them according to
the rules we've just given you. Whenever you sit down to write
a classified, always write it all out -
write down everything you want to say - and then go back over
it, crossing out words, and refining
your phraseology.
The final ingredient of your classified ad is of course, your
name, address to which the reader is to
respond
- where he's to send his money or write for further information.
Generally speaking, readers respond more often to ads that include
a name than to those showing
just initials or an address only. However, because advertising
costs are based upon the number of
words, or the amount of space your ad uses, the use of some names
in classified ads could become
quite expensive. If we were to ask our ad respondents
to write to or send their money to The
Research Writers & Publishers Association, or to Book Business
Mart, or even to Money Maker's
Opportunity Digest, our advertising costs
would be prohibitive. Thus we shorten our name
Researchers or Money-Makers. The point here is to think relative
to the placement costs of your ad,
and to shorten excessively long names.
The same holds true when listing your post office box number.
Shorten it to just plain Box 40, or in
the case of a rural delivery, shorten it to just RRl.
The important thing is to know the rules of profitable classified
ad writing, and to follow them. Hold
your costs in line.
Now you know the basics... the rest is up to you.
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