Note: this is my own story I have no connection with the cast of Diagnosis Murder or CBS three of the characters in my story belong to me. The rest of the characters belong to the producers of diagnosis murder and CBS. email laura.Meyer @ibm.net One Shot to Murder by Laura Meyer Dr. Mark Sloan head of internal medicine at Community General, went into the pathology lab and saw resident pathologist Amanda Bentley working on an autopsy. Mark noticed that Amanda was tired, she had been at the hospital since six o'clock that morning. Mark was just finishing rounds and wanted to talk to Amanda about some autopsies that raised some questions for the doctor. Amanda was looking over an autopsy, "Mark did we have a five year old girl admitted two weeks ago?" Amanda wondered. "Yes we did why do you ask?" Mark wanted to know. "I forgot to make sure the mom saw the report." Amanda told him. Mark then asked Amanda for the phone number because he had no record of it in his files. Mark noticed that Amanda was looking tired and gave her an exam to make sure nothing was really wrong with her. Now we find Mark and Amanda in the exam room and Mark has just started the examination. He found that Amanda was under a lot of stress and seemed sleepy. "Have you been sleeping well?" Mark inquired. "No I haven't been sleeping well." Amanda told the doctor. Mark was very worried about her and wrote something on her chart and he gave her some medicine that might help her. He also told her to rest more. Amanda then left the room to get her things and go home. Mark and Amanda walked to their cars and Mark said "remember we have that meeting tomorrow at eight in the morning." The night air had a chill to it that always made Amanda feel funny like something was going to happen. What that might be she was about to find out. Amanda then went through her mail and found a note that said an ex boyfriend was released from prison two days ago, Amanda was scared as she wondered what she would do if she ran into him again. Ten years ago Amanda & Bill were dating and was abusive to Amanda. Amanda had no idea what to do next and continued looking over her notes for the meeting plus she had paper work to do for the next day. Amanda later found a note in her mailbox that read: "I will come to see you.""Amanda was not sure what the last line of her note meant. Amanda later put the note and thought about what the last line of the note said out of her mind and went back to taking notes for the meeting with Mark in a few hours. What Amanda didn't know was that someone was on the way to see her late that night and continued to take notes for her meeting tomorrow. Back at Community General Hospital everything was closed for the day. Before Mark left the hospital he wrote a note for Amanda to help with his teaching tomorrow and showing the students how an autopsy is done. Amanda was doing paper work at 215 a.m. and felt her eyes getting very heavy. Suddenly someone broke a window. Amanda then tried to hide from this person but wasn't able to hide for very long because he found her hidden behind a door. Amanda had forgotten what her ex boyfriend had done to her about ten years ago. The strange man came at Amanda with a loaded gun. Amanda now stood cold with fear racing up and down her body. Now she wondered what to do. As this man held a gun he also had a tight grip on Amanda. She had no idea who that person really was except for a familiar voice though she couldn't quite place who the voice belonged to. He told Amanda she would be killed if she told anyone what this person was doing to her. The meeting was going to start in two hours. Amanda had only one question on her mind which was how would she leave with this man in the pathology lab? As Amanda thought of what to do the bad guy took an even tighter grip on her. "What are you doing here?" Amanda wanted to know. The bad guy didn't say anything at all to answer her questions next he then took a note from his pocket and gave it to Amanda. The note said there was more to come. Before the intruder left he hit Amanda so hard that she fell to the ground and was dizzy, tired. "Stay awake." He said. If Amanda didn't stay awake she would end up dead. Amanda left for the hospital at 6 a.m. and needed to help with the last minute details of the autopsies that Mark had questions about. Amanda had some idea that she was followed but there was no way to find out who might be following Amanda. The mysterious man that was following Amanda knew what he wanted and how he would kill Amanda. This bad guy was going to take pictures of Amanda and make everybody think that she is dead. As Amanda continued her drive to the hospital she felt as though she were being followed now we find Amanda working on last minute autopsy reports for the meeting set to began in an hour. Amanda felt dizzy and decided to take a nap for a little while. As she tried to take a nap she kept hearing the words "stay awake" go through her head. Mark was given the notes Amanda has taken on the autopsy reports and put them in the files. Next Mark had rounds to do and as he did them he was getting worried about Amanda. A patient that was shot badly was examined by Amanda and was doing very well. In a little while Amanda would teach mark's class about how an autopsy was performed. First Amanda needed some things from her lab having no idea that the intruder who followed her was now in the pathology lab about to kill her. Amanda felt as though someone followed her. Bill was right in her pathology lab and was becoming very dangerous, how dangerous Amanda was beginning to find out. Bill now was putting his deadly plan into action. He knew how many steps it took her to get inside the hospital, her car and every place Amanda went. Amanda was still in the lab about to leave when someone pushed her down to the ground and kicked her around ten times, 30 minutes later Amanda felt sick. Mark was starting to worry about her; class had begun 10 minutes ago. As Amanda continued walking to the class she felt a bad dizzy spell hit her, she didn't want Mark to find out because he would ask questions and Amanda wasn't ready to answer them at the moment. Mark had everybody take notes. Amanda was coming through the door, "everybody this is Amanda who will show you how an autopsy is done.""Mark said. Amanda now had a picture of an autopsy on the projector to show what an autopsy really looked like. Amanda than went on to explain that all an autopsy really was is just to find out what a person died of. The dizzy spell Amanda had earlier was coming back. As she continued to teach the class her legs fell out from under her. Mark quickly dismissed the class and caught Amanda before she fell. Amanda was now helped to her feet and was still dizzy; he then took Amanda to his office and wanted to examine her. Mark began his examination of Amanda and saw that something was wrong. Mark noticed that Amanda seemed different and very withdrawn. Next Mark asked Amanda some questions; "can you tell me why you are so tired?"""Can you tell me more about the events that led up to your feeling tired?"""Amanda couldn't tell Mark what was really going on because she needed more time to figure out what to do. As Amanda left mark's office he told her to take it easy now Mark thought that emotionally there might be something wrong with Amanda but he didn't know how to go about finding that information at the moment. Mark then decided to let Amanda rest awhile, as he did he went to get her chart when Mark was back in the room he noticed Amanda kept going to sleep and waking up. As Mark looked at Amanda's chart he also noticed that she kept waking up but not going to sleep. "Why wasn't Amanda going to sleep she knows that it is safe here."""Mark was bothered by the changes he had seen in Amanda and that she didn't seem like herself these days and that bothered Mark a lot. Before Amanda left for the day Mark stopped her in the hall and said, "call me if you need anything." Mark said. Bill (Amanda's stalker) was waiting at her house and in minutes Bill's plan had been set, now all he had to do was wait for Amanda. As she drove home she thought of the sleep that would soon come over her. Amanda then realized that she needed some extra paperwork that she remembered was at home. The paperwork that Amanda needed to do must be turned in by tomorrow morning and she also needed to call the hospital to find out if there was a meeting tomorrow. Now Amanda noticed that her house was very dark, having no idea that she was being watched. Amanda was sitting at the dinner table to do her paperwork then felt her body go limp. In a flash Amanda's world went black. Bill hit and kicked Amanda so hard that she fell onto the floor. Next Bill gave Amanda a heavy sleeping pill that would make it seem that Amanda had died that night. Bill left a note saying that Amanda was dead. Bill wanted to make sure that Amanda wouldn't be able to tell anyone one what had just taken place. Then put Amanda in the closet and walked the door. Mark arrived at the hospital early because he had patients to see and usually saw Amanda at the same time. Steve had questions to ask Amanda but as he stepped out of police headquarters he saw a note that was being handed to him that read: Amanda Bentley died yesterday of natural causes. Steve couldn't believe what he read; next he had to tell his dad what he found. "How would he do it?" Steve wondered as he walked down the hall of Community General Hospital. Dr. Sloan was busy with a patient who was resting. Steve quietly knocked on the door Mark didn't hear him come in the room. Steve still sat quietly with the note still in hand. Mark was about to leave the room to get the chart for his patient, when he saw his son Steve waiting to talk with him. "Steve what are you doing here?" Steve didn't say anything for a long time. Mark sat down beside Steve and waited. Finally Steve told Mark what was going on. "I don't know how to tell you this, I found this note on my desk as I left headquarters because I had to ask Amanda something. Mark took the note from Steve and silently let the news of Amanda's sudden passing sink in. Minutes later father and son cried together for a long time, when Mark was finally able to talk he said, "I just saw her yesterday she seemed tired but other than that she seemed fine. Now the hard part was how to tell the staff of Community General, that Amanda Bentley was dead or was she? Mark knew something was troubling him about the way Amanda was acting the last few days, but he couldn't quite put his finger on it. "Should we call the staff?" Steve wanted to know. "Before we call a staff meeting we should let Jesse know what happened. Mark went down the hall in the direction of the pathology lab where Jesse was taking over for Amanda. A knock was heard at the door. "Come in." Said Jesse. "Could I talk with you for just a minute?"asked Mark. Jesse could see that something was wrong. "Steve came and told me of a note that he found that sad Amanda had died yesterday." Mark waited for the reaction from Jesse. "Mark I don't think Amanda is really dead because if she were dying we would have been told by Amanda herself." Jesse said. Mark thought about the possibility that Jesse might be right, but how was Mark going to prove that Amanda wasn't really dead? Now Mark, Jesse, and Steve were in the doctor's lounge talking about what they knew so far. Steve asked this question of everybody in the room "did anyone see Amanda acting funny or different?"""Mark answered Steve's question. "Yesterday I saw Amanda acting really different she looked as though she wasn't getting enough rest. Later I examined her and found nothing wrong with her. As the examination continued I tried to ask her what happened and she wouldn't tell me. Jesse had said he hadn't noticed any changes in Amanda accept that she would look over her shoulder like someone was watching her or was coming to hurt her. "I am going to look for Amanda myself and I need Jesse and dad you stay here, because if I find Amanda she will need the best care that she can get."""Hours later Steve went to look for Amanda. As he drove to her house Steve wondered what and why somebody would harm a lady. Now Steve parked his car at the sidewalk and saw the house still dark inside" why were the lights inside Amanda's house turned off in the daytime." Steve thought to himself. Steve decided to see if he could see Amanda from inside the house. Steve was worried that the stalker might still harm Amanda and wanted to see if anyone was hurting Amanda. Next Steve went to a window and looked inside and didn't see Amanda anywhere. He thought that if he couldn't see Amanda inside the house she must be hidden somewhere inside the house, but where inside? Suddenly shots were fired and a figure was seen in the window. Steve took a picture of the man inside and would come back later tonight. Back at Community General Hospital Mark, Jesse and everyone was waiting to find out how Amanda was doing. Minutes later Amanda came in, Mark rushed to her side and looks her over he couldn't believe the shape she was in. "Take Amanda to the OR. Jesse ordered. Mark didn't think Amanda would make it through the night. In the lounge Mark was looking over Amanda's chart which showed she was severely beaten. Mark went to check on Amanda who was awake now Mark sat beside her and checked her vital signs just as Amanda was asking a question "Mark where am I?" He continued writing on her chart and said "you are at Community General." Amanda now recalled what happened that night, but the memories of that night weren't all clear to her yet. "Amanda can you tell me what happened that night? "Asked Mark. Amanda thought of what she was able to remember happening that night. "I remember driving home and doing paper work for you and as I was driving home I was followed or so I thought."Amanda told him. Mark asked her another question "you said you thought you were being followed, where was this man?" Mark wondered. "When you looked at your house how did it look?" Amanda sat up in bed a little better; "I remember the house being very dark because that was the way it looked as I pulled into the driveway." Mark was taking notes so he could tell Steve what he found. Before Mark left the room Amanda wanted to tell him one more thing "after I was in the house the man gave me something that may me very tired and then I was hit on the head." Amanda said. Mark wrote that down. "What was it that he gave you?" Mark wanted to know. He was very interested in what Amanda said. Tomorrow Mark was going to find out what really happened to Amanda. Now Mark had to call Steve and fast because he feared Amanda might be killed again. Mark ran in to check on Amanda and found she was doing ok. Mark and Steve checked Amanda's house and found still nothing, later Steve found notes that were left for Amanda. Mark read one of the notes and was concerned about what that note said. Amanda was now asleep and getting better, Mark was worried about what Amanda still had to go through on an emotional level. Mark went to check on Amanda before he left and found she was wide awake. "Mark what will happen to mean now?" She wondered. Mark wasn't sure what she meant by the question. "What do you mean?""Mark asked. Amanda made herself comfortable before continuing. "I should tell you that bill said he was going to kill me the night I was attacked. Mark listened now he was really worried, "why?" he wondered. Amanda had no answer to that question. Mark said goodbye to her and headed home for a rest. Steve found more notes, he had a feeling they lead up to something but what that was he didn't know. Bill was now Mad at the fact that Amanda wasn't dead now he must try to murder her again. Now Mark wasn't sure what to do now. Mark was headed home he didn't realize how tired he really was so he decided to read a book, a few pages into the book he fell asleep. Bill had found a way to murder Amanda again, this time he was sure his plan would work. Amanda went back to work having no idea what was in store for her. Amanda was catching up on some work when she found a note with what appeared to be paint on the note. She would test the note to see if paint was on the note Mark was seeing patients and knew that it was going to be a long day. Steve stopped by to give. Mark more of the notes that he found inside Amanda's house. Mark looked at the notes and found some sort of hidden plan within the notes he also found something else in the notes but couldn't figure out what that something was. Amanda felt tired and went to take a break when someone came into the emergency room that had a bad head wound that needed treatment immediately. Seven hours later the surgery was finished. Mark noticed that she was tired and offered to take her to his home and rest. Amanda decided to stop by for a while. Amanda suddenly fell asleep and forgot everything. Mark decided to let her sleep and take her home later. An hour later Amanda was home but something felt very odd. Suddenly she stopped what she was doing and said something but then felt a knife going inside her. The room was black and that was all Amanda remembered. Amanda struggled to get to a phone and when she finally did Mark answered, "hello who is this?" Then a voice said Amanda. "Amanda what happened?" Mark wondered. The telephone went dead. Amanda was lying on the floor unconscious. Mark called Steve to see if he could find Amanda and what happened to her. Mark studied the notes he had found and was able to figure out what the hidden message within the notes. The message was one of murder as Mark continued to read the notes he found that there were two different plans to murder Amanda. Mark figured out the need for the second plan was because the first one hadn't worked. The one question Mark had been why was a second plan needed? Another question Mark had was who was to be murdered? Mark noticed that as he continued to read through the note a name wasn't mentioned in the note. The next step was to go talk to Amanda and see what more she could tell. Mark called Steve to let him know of his findings. "Thanks for letting me know about this dad, I would like to talk with Amanda to see if she can help us arrest this man." Steve hung up the telephone and went directly to Amanda's house and wanted to find some clues as to who might be murdered. Mark checked on Amanda and asked her some questions "can you tell me what happened that night? Amanda took a few minutes to think about that night. "I remember driving home and doing paperwork for you that you needed the next day. When I started to do the paperwork I noticed the house was quiet and I thought I was hearing things so I ignored that for awhile. Later I heard someone come behind me and the next thing I remember was being hit on the head and then I was given a pill to lower my heartbeat." Amanda told him. "Do you remember what the name of the pill was?" Mark asked. "I don't remember the name of the pill. Amanda said. "I am going to your house to see what I can find out. Mark was now inside the house Steve was still busy finding evidence and had so far found nothing. Mark found a lot of notes and read what one of them said. "I will see you later and we will have fun together."""Steve looked at his father and wondered if all of these notes might have to do with Amanda and if so how? "I am going back to the hospital to see how Amanda is doing. Mark stopped to ask one of the nurses how Amanda was. "She is not sleeping well and when I checked on her she seemed to be saying something but I couldn't understand what she said.""""Thank you very much." Mark told the nurse. Mark entered Amanda's room and found her sleeping fitfully and told the nurse to give Amanda something to help her sleep. Mark brought one of the notes and read it again. He was worried about what Amanda still had to go through in terms of an emotional level. Minute's later Amanda was awake. "Mark what will happen to me now? Amanda wondered as she thought of Bill. "What do you mean?"Mark asked. "I should tell you that Bill said he would kill me!"""Why?"Mark wondered with a touch of concern in his voice. Amanda had no answer. Mark said good night to Amanda and headed for home and a rest. Meanwhile Steve found more notes and had a feeling the notes led to something. But what? Steve didn't know the answer to that question. Bill was now mad that Amanda wasn't dead now he was going to try again and he knew just what he wanted to do. As Mark continued going home he wasn't sure what he could do for Amanda now. As he walked in the door Mark suddenly realized that he was very tired and thought that reading a good book might help clear his thoughts. Now a few pages into his book Mark fell asleep Bill had found away to murder her again, this time he was sure it would work. Bill would stab Amanda at night in her house. Meanwhile Steve found more notes that were leading up to a plan for what Steve wasn't sure. Amanda was going back to work tomorrow Bill now had a plan he would work out his plan was to stab Amanda when it was dark so that when he did it Amanda wouldn't be able to see who was hurting her. Mark wanted to take Amanda home because he was worried that she would be harmed. Mark took Amanda home so that he would be able to protect her from any further harm. Before Amanda left for Mark's house she changed her mind and stayed home. Amanda tied to get some sleep but was unsuccessful. Later that night memories of her earlier meeting with Bill and being held at gunpoint started playing in her mind. The clock radio said it was 2:56 a.m. Amanda wondered why she heard the phone ringing she thought the hospital might need her. Amanda picked up the phone "hello?" After a few minutes Amanda heard breathing on the other end and all was quiet. Amanda was able to sleep a little bit but later heard something "now I am here!" Bill said. "Please leave." Amanda said. The eyes of the stranger were very red; Amanda was sore from previous meetings with Bill. Minutes later Amanda saw what might be a weapon and wasn't sure what the weapon was, as she looked closer she saw a knife and noticed her arm and face bleeding. "Now I won't have to see you again, by." He said. Now Amanda to call Mark. The ringing of the phone awakened Mark "hello" he said in the phone. "Mark I need help I was hurt. Mark asked Amanda what had happened, " I was stabbed in the face and arm." Amanda said very worried. "Where are you?" Mark asked. "I am at home. "Amanda said as she began to feel faint. The telephone went dead. Mark drove as quickly as he could he wondered whether he could get to her before she died. Mark arrived at Amanda's house hoping he had gotten there in time to save her life. When Mark saw Amanda he noticed that she was bleeding very badly. The ambulance was on the way. The ambulance was taking Amanda and Mark to community General Hospital on the way Mark was busy assessing Amanda's condition. Now Mark and Amanda were at the hospital going immediately to the operating room Amanda's condition wasn't good. The next three hours for Amanda were going to be very critical. The wounds to Amanda's face were very deep. Mark wasn't sure whether they would leave a scar. He would wait and see how the surgery went and how well her face healed. The notes Amanda had been receiving might lead to her stalker they might lead to something more that Amanda might not know anything about. Steve went back to Amanda's house and found a picture of the man Steve believed might be stalking Amanda. One question still bothered Steve "where was this man and the weapon?""He thought as he continued searching. Steve spotted a drawer that was left open and in the drawer was the gun. Steve went back to the station to see if the gun had any fingerprints and if they belonged to someone named Bill. Amanda was going back to work tomorrow taking care of autopsies as she always did. Later a patient came in with a gunshot wound to his foot. The bullet was later removed. While the bullet was being removed Amanda had a flashback came to her mind like a speeding train Amanda stopped as she wondered about the gun and where it was located. Bill put the gun in a drawer but which drawer? Amanda felt dizzy and couldn't stop the memories of that first night she had seen Bill. Mark noticed Amanda beginning to faint "Amanda sit down." Mark said. Amanda could see the gun in a drawer but she couldn't see which one. Mark put his hand on Amanda's shoulder. Finally the flashback stopped. Amanda wanted to talk to Mark about the first night she saw Bill. Amanda now felt dizzy Mark saw her getting dizzy. "Amanda sit down." Mark said. Amanda sat down and could see the image of where the weapon was. Mark put his hands on her shoulders to comfort her. Finally Amanda's flashback stopped. "Do you want to talk about it?" Mark asked Amanda told Mark she wanted to talk about the flashback. "Mark I have been feeling tired lately and I can't get rid of those memories of that night. I remember that the gun is in my dresser drawer." Amanda recounted. Mark thought about what was said. "Why didn't you say anything about this before?" Mark wondered. "I have only just started remembering more of what happened" Amanda told him. Steve was called to get the gun from Amanda's house. "Dad what did Amanda say about the gun?" Steve wanted to know. "All she said was that the gun was in her dresser drawer." Mark told his son. Steve really wanted this guy caught if he didn't get the guy he would never forgive himself. "Dad I have an idea of how to catch bill Amanda is going to have to let Bill get her so we have evidence that she was harmed." Steve said. Mark wasn't sure if the idea would work but if it was the only way so be it he thought. As Amanda was about to leave community General she felt a dizzy spell overcome her And Amanda Fainted. Dr. Sloan raced to his colleague's side and felt for a pulse. He found it to be low. Mark had Amanda put on a hospital bed so he could check Amanda out. Mark could tell Amanda was coming around. "Mark what happened?" Amanda asked. "You fainted and I am checking to make sure that you haven't broken anything." Mark told her. Steve came to take Mark home from the hospital. "Is Amanda all right?""Steve asked. "Amanda fainted and has been asleep ever since." Mark told him. Now we find Amanda asleep at Mark's house. Mark was making dinner that night for Amanda, Steve, and Jesse. As they ate dinner Amanda found another note in her purse. She pulled the note out of her purse and read the note. Mark, Steve, and Jesse watched as Amanda continued to read what the note said. The room was quiet no one said a word. Finally Amanda told them what the note said; "I will see you again tonight." The note had no signature, which left everybody wandering who wrote the note. Amanda felt scared about Bill trying to hurt her down again. Steve immediately called headquarters and had a few police cars guarding mark's house. Nightfall was beginning and Amanda was trying to rest and could not. At precisely 4 a.m. Bill was at the Sloan House ready to finish his job. Bill had a gun to Amanda's head "if you move I'll shoot!" Bill proclaimed. Steve stood in the doorway and watched as Bill continued to hurt Amanda. "Put your hands up and face the wall!" Steve ordered. Next Steve handcuffed Bill and had him taken to police headquarters. Mark sat by Amanda and wondered if she would be ok. "Mark I am glad he is gone and he won't harm me anymore, do you think there will be a trial?" Amanda wondered. "I think that there will be a trial and you probably will need to testify against Bill." Mark put an arm around Amanda. Steve told Amanda that Bill was in jail and that a trial might happen. In two weeks a trial would take place. Mark was checking Amanda to see how her bruises were healing, they were almost gone. "How are you feeling?" Mark wanted to know. "Fine but very scared about testifying against Bill Black and having to look him in the face."Amanda really didn't want to testify at all. Mark held her hand tightly he told her that he would go to court with her for moral support. Steve had been questioning Bill for two hours "why did you want to hurt Amanda?" Steve said angrily. Bill thought for a minute before he answered the question. "I wanted her dead because she would never go out with me." Steve couldn't believe anybody would stalk somebody because the person didn't want to date them. Bill went back to his cell. Steve went back to community General to tell Amanda what he found out from Bill. "Dad is Amanda here?"Steve needed to know. "She is resting right now what did Bill say?" Mark had wandered what Bill might say. Steve told Mark what Bill had said Mark couldn't believe anybody would be harmed for that reason. Mark thought about what Amanda had been through and what she would have to go through. The trial for Bill Black was to start in one hour Amanda was very nervous. Amanda told her story to the court for an hour. Mark also took the stand in Amanda's defense. "Dr. Sloan when you found the notes that the defendant left for my client what was your impression of them?" Linda May Amanda's lawyer asked. "My impression of the notes when I read them was of a very sick man." Mark stated. "Did you ever talk to the defendant Bill Black?" Linda questions. "No I never talked to him." Mark said. "Dr. Sloan could you tell us if you see the defendant in the court room. "He is the one with the blue jacket." Mark answered. The court recessed so the jury could deliberate. The jury came back an hour later. Everybody filed back in the courtroom to await the verdict. "Will the defendant please rise." The judge said. "Has the jury reached a verdict?"The judge asked. " We have your Honor." The jury foreman read the verdict: "we find the defendant guilty of stalking and the attempted murder of Amanda Bentley. Amanda cried as the verdict was read. The judge banged his gavel to bring order to the trial. " Would be defendant like to say anything before sentence is pronounced?" Judge Brian wade asked. "No your Honor." Bill said. "I hereby sentence you to 25 years in prison for the attempted murder of Dr. Amanda Bentley. The day after the trial Amanda was in the pathology lab crying Mark wanted to ask her a question. He forgot the question and held Amanda as she cried finally able to let her feelings out. Later that evening everybody had a picnic "thanks for being there for me Mark." Amanda said. "Anytime Amanda." Mark said as he gave Amanda a hug. The end. Note: this is my own story I have no connection with the cast of diagnosis murder or CBS.