Sailor Time's Explaination- first insert

Would this be better in first person view? I can do it that way… in fact I almost did so… this is a short read, quite confusing however, I should be able to explain later. If I put this in first person I'll be able to use it in my planned series of `true' stories.

The dim lights of space flickered over everything within the ship. Now there was only silence, only the faint hissing could be heard from various equipment. Still no one spoke or moved as the minutes dragged on… as if time had been stopped. Then it was ended…

As if in slow motion, huge flames of fire jumped from the brilliant star colliding into the small planet. When the first flame licked the planet's surface everyone had to pounce forward and hold tightly to the young woman who sprang into action, screaming, "NO! STOP IT! STOP!" She yelled, tears trailing in streams down her face, "It's not fair! Why?! Why? God Damnit why?!" She screamed again, over and over until her voice grew hoarse.

Finally her friends let her go, knowing that the realization of it being too late to stop had sunk in. As she stumbled to the main window she rested her hands against the glass. "No… please…" she whispered, "I just can't…" she bowed her head as a sob overtook her. Head pressed against the window she let the tears leak out, mixing in the reflection of fire on the metal haul.

Behind her, the small group hid within the shadows, leaning on one another for support. Tears soaked through the stiff fabric of one woman's uniform as she watched her closest friend. Her lips parted as she murmured mentally, 'My friend, I'm so sorry… our home… friends… family… your-` her eyes filled with tears and she looked away from the window, 'Your love… I'm so sorry…'

Remaining orbited around the debris of the previously collided star and planet was a small ship. The once shiny haul that shone with glory was dirtied with seeing the death of so many, now. The occupants of the ship were no better, all worn and haggard… everyone felt the grief.

Without a word, the blonde woman sat down hard at the control panel before firing the engines. A sob and sound of protest came behind her but the woman stopped it with a shake of her head, "We know where we need to be…" was her whispered comment.

No other objections came as the ship began to move out and away from the horror- but no matter how far away the debris was from them, they'd never forget… could never, forget.

Glow lights brightened the landing pad as a dull gray haul of a ship landed. "It's a foreign ship, my queen."

"Yes, yes, I know… what's the markings? Could it be…?" suddenly she gasped and rang in through a nearby intercom to gather her daughter and court before running down the path towards the newly arrived ship.

"Majesty, what is it?" Asked the black-haired princess as she moved forward with her friends.

A soft hissing noise came as the ramp was lowered from the ship, finally a group of nine females emerged. The red-haired young woman stood tall, yet she looked aged and worn even in the radiant senshi fuku. "Selene," she acknowledged.

Selene, Queen of the moon, nodded her head in response, "Lionna, why do we have the pleasure of this visit."

"She means," broke in a younger woman with lime-colored hair, "we have come… to be guardians. If terms are the same, we will stay."

A breeze blew through the silence and surrounded the queen as she stood, knowing something of major importance had happened. She also added the fact that they would not be likely to inform her on what had happened, all she could do was consent, "Yes…" she slowly managed a smile,

Senshi Sisters: (my characters and a certain number of people-who know who they are- `own' these characters)


	Lionna's Corner of Anime Fanfiction \| home Sailor Time's Explaination- first insert "_______" By Sailor ClearMoon PG 1/1 Would this be better in first person view? I can do it that way… in fact I almost did so… this is a short read, quite confusing however, I should be able to explain later. If I put this in first person I'll be able to use it in my planned series of `true' stories. Disclaimers are at end. ~~~~~~~ The dim lights of space flickered over everything within the ship. Now there was only silence, only the faint hissing could be heard from various equipment. Still no one spoke or moved as the minutes dragged on… as if time had been stopped. Then it was ended… As if in slow motion, huge flames of fire jumped from the brilliant star colliding into the small planet. When the first flame licked the planet's surface everyone had to pounce forward and hold tightly to the young woman who sprang into action, screaming, "NO! STOP IT! STOP!" She yelled, tears trailing in streams down her face, "It's not fair! Why?! Why? God Damnit why?!" She screamed again, over and over until her voice grew hoarse. Finally her friends let her go, knowing that the realization of it being too late to stop had sunk in. As she stumbled to the main window she rested her hands against the glass. "No… please…" she whispered, "I just can't…" she bowed her head as a sob overtook her. Head pressed against the window she let the tears leak out, mixing in the reflection of fire on the metal haul. Behind her, the small group hid within the shadows, leaning on one another for support. Tears soaked through the stiff fabric of one woman's uniform as she watched her closest friend. Her lips parted as she murmured mentally, 'My friend, I'm so sorry… our home… friends… family… your-` her eyes filled with tears and she looked away from the window, 'Your love… I'm so sorry…' Remaining orbited around the debris of the previously collided star and planet was a small ship. The once shiny haul that shone with glory was dirtied with seeing the death of so many, now. The occupants of the ship were no better, all worn and haggard… everyone felt the grief. Without a word, the blonde woman sat down hard at the control panel before firing the engines. A sob and sound of protest came behind her but the woman stopped it with a shake of her head, "We know where we need to be…" was her whispered comment. No other objections came as the ship began to move out and away from the horror- but no matter how far away the debris was from them, they'd never forget… could never, forget. Glow lights brightened the landing pad as a dull gray haul of a ship landed. "It's a foreign ship, my queen." "Yes, yes, I know… what's the markings? Could it be…?" suddenly she gasped and rang in through a nearby intercom to gather her daughter and court before running down the path towards the newly arrived ship. "Majesty, what is it?" Asked the black-haired princess as she moved forward with her friends. The queen raised her hand, motioning them to wait, "You'll… see…" she murmured. A soft hissing noise came as the ramp was lowered from the ship, finally a group of nine females emerged. The red-haired young woman stood tall, yet she looked aged and worn even in the radiant senshi fuku. "Selene," she acknowledged. Selene, Queen of the moon, nodded her head in response, "Lionna, why do we have the pleasure of this visit." "You aren't well-informed," the navy-haired woman commented dryly. "She means," broke in a younger woman with lime-colored hair, "we have come… to be guardians. If terms are the same, we will stay." A breeze blew through the silence and surrounded the queen as she stood, knowing something of major importance had happened. She also added the fact that they would not be likely to inform her on what had happened, all she could do was consent, "Yes…" she slowly managed a smile, "Welcome to the Moon Kingdom… Senshi Sisters…" ~~~~~~~ And so joined the Senshi Sisters. Hard to follow? Oh yes… definitely. Senshi Sisters: (my characters and a certain number of people-who know who they are- `own' these characters) Sailor(s) ClearMoon Orbit Time Elara Aurora Lunar Larissa Phobos Titus And of course everyone knows Naoko's senshi and should know that I own them in NO way.