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Name:
Mox Jet
Website:
This one! (duh)
URL:
If you need to check....
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Date:
31 Mar 2001
Time:
00:01:22
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Just checking to see if this worked out okay. If Night was right, I'm going to have to change the form names so it looks okay. That, and I get to be the first person to sign! Peace, -Mox

Name:
Mox Jet
Website:
Planeswalker Universe
URL:
members.tripod.com/mox_jet
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Mox personally gave me the URL
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V1
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Date:
31 Mar 2001
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00:17:02
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Just testing again. Now, all I need to do is figure out how to delete that original post.....Peace, -Mox

Name:
Nightsong
Website:
The Night Haven
URL:
members.tripod.com/thenightsong/
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Mox personally gave me the URL
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Date:
31 Mar 2001
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01:41:34
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Heh... good to see you finally got a guest book up, mi amigo. Most nice, but you don't have a j00 sux0R option anywhere. I missed it.

And kickin' site, might I add.

Later...

Name:
Ben
Website:
Imperial Literature (not mine, but it's the place I'm putting my work)
URL:
www.imperial-literature.com
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Mox personally gave me the URL
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Yes
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Yes
Date:
31 Mar 2001
Time:
13:22:10
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Geez, calling me an author is a stretch, but why not? Anyway this page honestly rocks, you are obviously putting loads of effort in to it. Of course I'm speaking about the guy who wrote a friggin' NOVEL in his spare time so of course he's going to go whole hog on a web page. Well done.

Ben

Name:
NeoKefka
Website:
The Fanatic's Tower
URL:
http://members.xoom.com/neokefka_99/main/fanatic.htm
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Yes
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Date:
09 Apr 2001
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14:39:58
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Great site Mox, I am definitely looking forward to contributing to the fanverse that you've created. Rock on dude.

Name:
Lucent Mazer
Website:
The valley of cheese!!
URL:
Wouldn't you like to know?
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Date:
16 Apr 2001
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23:15:27
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Ha!! You suck royally, Mox, and your character in WoI sucks too! If you weren't so useless, I'd use one of my overly powerful spells on you!!!

...And then I'd figure out why the hell Night wrote this. Seriously, he's mental.

Name:
Jack McKlane
Website:
Planeswalker Universe
URL:
www.iamtheultimatebeing.com/yesstrongerthananeternal.htm
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Yes
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Yes
Date:
17 Apr 2001
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21:34:33
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Manzer, just remember, even Eternals don't live forever. At least I go out there and do something with my life, not just sit in your room and wack off while looking at pictures of Lucia. Yeah, you heard me. And don't try lying. Night told me all about that!

Name:
Tom
Website:
I don't have one, and probably never will...
URL:
see above
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Mox personally gave me the URL
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Works Section
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No
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Yes
Date:
19 May 2001
Time:
13:15:29
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Damn Garvey, you have nice site. I could never put together something this organized and just plain cool. Let me know if you need any artwork. I'd be glad to do some. Oh yeah, great (and I mean that) story. Here's a suggestion: do a Xenogears fanfic.

Name:
Mikau Kaiou
Website:
The Fanfic Base
URL:
Not currently functional
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Linked from Another Page
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Works Section
Author:
Yes
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Yes
Date:
28 May 2001
Time:
12:36:50
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This fic is pretty good, aside from some various spelling and grammatical errors. It's a winner in my book. (Haha! Lame pun!)

Name:
torin
Website:
none
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Date:
31 May 2001
Time:
18:23:29
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hey wat is up, i think your planeswalkers story series is interesting. i would like to know what happened to magus after the fall of zeal. i mean did he go off to kill the lavoids like schala did? your stories are great and the characters are tight. i am trying to writte fanfic but don't have any ideas. are you going to have a section with all the statistics for all the characters? it would be cool to see drawings of the LEA ships. sorry for taking a minute of your time but i like your stories and will continue to be a fan of your fic..??!!

Name:
Markol
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Date:
05 Jun 2001
Time:
14:32:10
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Good job Garvey, yeah, exactly, if I was not such a lazy slob I would sit down and read your entire novel. I'll just put it on my to-do list, any way, keep up the good work. =-M-= -=L=-

Name:
WanderingBard
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No
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Yes
Date:
23 Aug 2001
Time:
11:53:06
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Your writing is quite good.

Name:
James Nes Pentel
Website:
www.moxisgay.com
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Other
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Other Section
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Yes
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No
Date:
08 Sep 2001
Time:
19:15:45
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You are gay.... flaming homo........ Doucha bag........ M to the gayo O to the fruitcake X to the homo

you like men.

Name:
P. Nes
Website:
<a href="www.mox.jet.isgay.com">DEFINTETELY</a>
URL:
HERE
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Random Keyword Searching
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Author:
Yes
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Yes
Date:
08 Sep 2001
Time:
19:21:19
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Waste of time..... I agree with James Nes Pentel.... I hope you do something more constructive... And i guess, stop spanking off all the time.

Signed P. Nes

Name:
Dan Cuddy
Website:
Bla
URL:
also bLa
Found_Page_By:
Got the address from a friend
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Other Section
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No
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Yes
Date:
09 Dec 2001
Time:
20:46:40
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Inflamable means flamable?

Name:
Galatealis
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Other
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Date:
13 Jan 2002
Time:
15:37:10
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Ooooh, this is neato "mox". Quite impressive, so this is what you are doing with your free time, egh?

Name:
Galatealis
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Other
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No
Date:
13 Jan 2002
Time:
15:37:21
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Ooooh, this is neato "mox". Quite impressive, so this is what you are doing with your free time, egh?

Name:
Faile
Website:
URL:
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Surfed on In
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Works Section
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No
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Yes
Date:
23 Jan 2002
Time:
19:22:33
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you seem to be pretty much an expert on the Plansewalker characters. I have one question on them. Can they be killed? If so, how? I've read through a lot of things and would like to contact you. My e-mail is Faile@hotmail.com Please, if you could answer that question for me or even direct me to places where I can get the information, I would appreaciate it greatly

Name:
Fran (TweetiB333@aol.com)
Website:
online Webshots album:
URL:
http://community.webshots.com/user/tweetib33
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Surfed on In
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Works Section
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No
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No
Date:
13 Feb 2002
Time:
01:42:21
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I'm a Notre Dame mom...I lost an email address, (another ND mom)..and put "Notre Dame" in the AOL search. So I saw your profile and decided to check out your website. It's pretty neat, although your kind of writing is not my "thing", I truly admire someone with the skill and the discipline to write. Hope that you (1) made it in to Notre Dame, and (2) will either fence there and/or march in the band of the Fighting Irish. My son plays the sax in the band (we all know what a sax is!), and he would not trade those moments for anything in the world. He's a junior, and has been on the Dean's List his first 5 semesters. Anway, hi...though I'll say "good luck", sounds like you really don't need "luck" -- you've got what you need to make it!

Name:
Randy Pentel
Website:
www.garvemasterflex.com
URL:
Found_Page_By:
Mox personally gave me the URL
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No
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No
Date:
20 Feb 2002
Time:
19:33:47
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You're work is amazing considering I haven't read it. I find it stylish and well done. If I have nothing to do for a few years I might read this masterpiece. I would like to thank Mox for this quality literature. It was truly a life changer, I hope it will do the same for you that it did for me. GO MOX...GO MOX...GO MOX... P.S. Don't let you're head get so big you can't fit in the door, you're a celebrity now!

Name:
Craig Pentel
Website:
www.eatmyarse.com
URL:
mike=like men
Found_Page_By:
Mox personally gave me the URL
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Other Section
Author:
Yes
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No
Date:
20 Feb 2002
Time:
19:39:08
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your the g a to y then you must of been a HOMO. Get a spoon and eat my ass. You will feel my flashlight rub against your virgin rear. Come over here camper Mikey my sleeping bag is XXL large. Pentel FOREVER BAD BOY 4 LIFE were the damn SUPERTROOPERS!!!!!!!!!!!

Name:
Corlock78
Website:
Don't got one
URL:
Found_Page_By:
Got the address from a friend
Favorite_Section:
Works Section
Author:
Yes
Read_My_Work:
Yes
Date:
29 Apr 2002
Time:
22:08:31
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Garvey, there's just three slight problems in your Planeswalker fic. I've read through part 27 at this point and these three things just keep nagging at me so I thought I'd inform you about them. I unfortunately couldn't find your e-mail address otherwise I would have just sent you an e-mail, so I'm putting them up here. Essentially, I don't understand why when Jack is fighting Magus that he doesn't use his force tech armor, especially since it can be sent through time to him at all times through the wrist/hand thing, and he'd need all the protection and any advantage he can get against Magus. The second is why when he needs new clothing to keep warm why he doesn't just get some force tech armor. After all in the first chapter, from the way you describe it, it sounds as if it covers the entire body, and you also mention that it has an internal cooling system. If that is the case, I wouldn't be suprised if it had an internal heating system for both extremes, making it much more effective clothing for Jack in the cave than half pants and Sarah's vest. The third and final thing is that Tristian says that Mike must have the Gate Key, when he and the other two are trapped in 600 ad. What bothers me about this is that Jack then says that he and Sarah are stuck in Zeal until some sort of chronal anomoly takes place. However, when you first introduce the Gate Key in your fic, Jack says that they made some adjustments to it so that it can make a Gate anywhere. If that is true there is no reason for Jack and Sarah to be trapped in Zeal. Either you have to have Tristian discover he had the Gate Key all along, or have it destroyed or lost at some point in the story before the events in 600ad and Zeal that I am referring to take place. This needs to be clarified at that point in the story so that the reader doesn't think your characters are idiots. Now if you clear this up later in the fic, that's great, but it would be better if you explain why both groups are trapped where they are when it happens. This could be served either by taking away the Gate Key's property to make Gates anywhere or destroying the Gate Key at some earlier point in the story. As for the rest of the Planeswalker story, it's great. Very well written, obvously there are the spelling mistakes but the story is still extremely engaging with them, which means you've done a good job writing it, if the reader can ignore those mistakes. So all in all you've done a good job on the story, just remember all the equipment your characters have and you'll be fine.

Name:
Mike McD
Website:
umm...
URL:
Found_Page_By:
Mox personally gave me the URL
Favorite_Section:
World Section
Author:
Yes
Read_My_Work:
Yes
Date:
09 May 2002
Time:
12:24:12
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Just wanted to post something, thats all.

Name:
Phase
Website:
Steel Vipers
URL:
https://www.angelfire.com/stars3/sv/
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Linked from Another Page
Favorite_Section:
Works Section
Author:
No
Read_My_Work:
Yes
Date:
09 Jun 2002
Time:
01:55:15
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Great fanfic Mox. I would read more of it, but you're not writing it anymore and that adds some difficulty. Update the site!

Name:
Casey Topol
Website:
URL:
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Mox personally gave me the URL
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Author:
No
Read_My_Work:
Yes
Date:
02 Jul 2002
Time:
17:16:15
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Hey Garvey... Nice readin material here... Write more about your experiances w/ the agua sports haha oh garvey ur the best :) Peace

Name:
letnep
Website:
Its where your dreams CUM true!!!
URL:
www.cummicus.com
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Other
Favorite_Section:
Other Section
Author:
Yes
Read_My_Work:
Yes
Date:
15 Jul 2002
Time:
19:09:41
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I write porno scripts, i would like to use some of your work, I especially liked the part about the 2 men alone together. too bad there were not many women on the island, I guess u must not like women... but that's ok with our company, we are always looking for some good anime. Th aqua sports could make for intriguing scenes... My e-mail is = bounceupanddown@cummicus.com send me, some more of your work.

Name:
Cronax AKA Lathain
Website:
two: Lathain Designing and Gerudoanime
URL:
http://home.planet.nl/~baste007/index.html http://www.gerudoanime.tk
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Linked from Another Page
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Works Section
Author:
Yes
Read_My_Work:
Yes
Date:
19 Jul 2002
Time:
09:35:33
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Yes, I actually took the Lathain name out of ur story and made it my second nick! I really like ur stories, and would realy ,like to read on in planeswalkers II. If u have MSN, plz add me, 'cause I'm a big fan and I'd like to speak to you in person. I'm dutch if you hadn't allready noticed by my crappy english( or at least I think it's crappy). I think that all those flamers here are yous too pathetic, not beïng able just to post a normal thing. I'm a fanfic author too... or at least I try to be from time to time. If u say it's okay, I'm gonna try and write a fanfic in the planeswalker universe and give u alot of credit. If u don't, I might do it anyways but I might accidentally forget to mention that it's your universe and ur fanfic that inspired me. Nah just kiddin, but plz give me permission ok?

Name:
Cronax AKA Lathain
Website:
two: Lathain Designing and Gerudoanime
URL:
http://home.planet.nl/~baste007/index.html http://www.gerudoanime.tk
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Favorite_Section:
Works Section
Author:
Yes
Read_My_Work:
Yes
Date:
19 Jul 2002
Time:
09:35:39
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Yes, I actually took the Lathain name out of ur story and made it my second nick! I really like ur stories, and would realy ,like to read on in planeswalkers II. If u have MSN, plz add me, 'cause I'm a big fan and I'd like to speak to you in person. I'm dutch if you hadn't allready noticed by my crappy english( or at least I think it's crappy). I think that all those flamers here are yous too pathetic, not beïng able just to post a normal thing. I'm a fanfic author too... or at least I try to be from time to time. If u say it's okay, I'm gonna try and write a fanfic in the planeswalker universe and give u alot of credit. If u don't, I might do it anyways but I might accidentally forget to mention that it's your universe and ur fanfic that inspired me. Nah just kiddin, but plz give me permission ok?

Name:
HullSatan
Website:
URL:
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Random Keyword Searching
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Other Section
Author:
Yes
Read_My_Work:
No
Date:
26 Jul 2002
Time:
11:13:04
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Read some of it. Dude i am gonna start coding for games really soon this year i am gonna go all out and try to make a basic RPG what u say can i use some of ur story, u will get full credit and all. Dragon Warrior type my guess. Little guy running around.

Name:
Shadow
Website:
Roleplayer's Haven
URL:
www.rphaven.net/forum/
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Linked from Another Page
Favorite_Section:
Works Section
Author:
Yes
Read_My_Work:
Yes
Date:
21 Oct 2002
Time:
09:05:51
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Come on, Mox, fork over the fics, man. I've been waiting forever for the next installment of Twins of Destiny.

Name:
Neal From Isgay.com
Website:
http://www.neal.isgay.com
URL:
http://www.george.bush.isgay.com
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Favorite_Section:
Works Section
Author:
Yes
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No
Date:
28 Nov 2002
Time:
20:19:14
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Name:
Brian
Website:
none
URL:
none
Found_Page_By:
Mox personally gave me the URL
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Other Section
Author:
No
Read_My_Work:
Yes
Date:
28 Dec 2002
Time:
00:53:33
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Nice site man! Can't wait for the new one. Have fun with that. Trip some balls yo.

Name:
ghgf
Website:
hfh
URL:
hgfg
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Random Keyword Searching
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Site Section
Author:
Yes
Read_My_Work:
Yes
Date:
18 Jan 2003
Time:
10:18:20
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hhghfgh

Name:
emily
Website:
URL:
Found_Page_By:
Mox personally gave me the URL
Favorite_Section:
World Section
Author:
No
Read_My_Work:
Yes
Date:
05 Dec 2001
Time:
22:42:57
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hi gar..i mean mox. i really like your page and the writings not bad of what i've seen... keep it up

By Mox Jet
Copyright © 2001 by Planeswalker Universe. All rights reserved.
Revised: 18 Jan 2003 10:18:21 -0500 .