words

that

 just more of the same

freeze

my

blood

eileen writes :

i want them to look as if they are next to each other on the page

so as to almost make them read concurrently

at the same time as each other if it were possible for the eye

know wot i mean?

as if 2 voices

or both thoughts echoing at the same time as the brain can almost do on occasion

andrews reply :

it sorta vibrates back and forth between to two sides, its VERY clever

larry eigner is an american poet who uses that split style a lot