Photo Essays
3.14.99
"Society
members"
These three society
members of todays society are having a zany time.
Damon, a fine boy on the left is having a zany
time. The girl in the middle, she is having a
zany time, and lee anne rhyme is having a zany
time. So in my opening statement, when i said
that the three members of todays society in the
picture are having a zany time, I ment it because
in the following passage I backed it up by
mentioning the name of the society member, what
kind of time they were having (zany), and
concluded by summarizing what I discussed. I hope
that you will consider that my stomach was
hurting during class Mrs. Jones during the day
you tought about run-on sentences, and will
consider that when you grade my essay on members
of todays society having a zany time. Thank you
and may the Lord richly bless your life. |
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