here is a quick taste of the full length film that will be done in the summer of 1999, due in the winter the film was postponed due to hibernation by the directors and cast, but the nice weather is here and we have our shit together.......really we do!
the story
is the teenage life of the "cool guy", "geek", "oddball", "homosexual", "skank". this is a guide to the life of all of the above and the hell and fun they go through. read the script, the story is based on a few of the writers own buds, no names mentioned...
the team
writer/director: greg morrell
rough editing: greg morrell/aiden morrision
final editing: aiden morrison
actors: N/A
camera/ass.dir: jeff mcComb
camera: jeff mcComb/greg morrell
the script: (second draft)
1.INT. MELVIN'S BEDROOM. MORNING:
We see that it is morning because we
fade in on the clock it reads 9:30, as the camera moves around the room
the alarm goes off. Marvin who is sleeping in the bed starts to talk in
his sleep, he takes a swat at the alarm but misses it and knocks off a
lamp, he takes another swing and hits some books off. We cut to a shot
of his eyes opening, a shot of his hand hitting the sleep button, then
back to his eyes closing and a smile on his face. We cut to a shot of his
face, he looks at the clock and it reads 10:00, he jumps up and falls back
down.
MARVIN
Shit!
He gets up and walks into the bathroom,
takes a piss, washes his face, brushes his teeth, and steps in to the shower.
He starts to babble. We are now in the kitchen and watch him eat a pop
tart, the phone rings. He picks it up.
MARVIN
Hello?....Hey what's up......no I just
got up.....what time you thinking.....I don't know, that's in fifteen minutes,
I can make it, but I might be late......fine I'll take the bus......no
I don't care......okay I'll see ya.....hang on where is it..okay bye.
2.INT. BUS. MORNING:
Marvin is sitting on the bus when a
kid walks up to him. The kid sits beside him and starts to pick his nose,
the kid is a little skater punk type. Marvin looks at him and the kid looks
back.
SKATER KID
What the hell, guy?
MARVIN
What?
SKATER KID
You's looking at me, so what up?
MARVIN
Listen little "G" I don't mean-
SKATER KID
Little "G"? I'm no "G", you call me
that I'll have to bust your ass up, got it?
MARVIN
Yeah, as I was saying, I just don't
think you should pick your nose in public, like that.
SKATER KID
Oh, so you gonna do something 'bout
it?
MARVIN
No, I just think your giving your self
a bad image.
SKATER KID
Listen I don't have to listen to you,
but what am I doing? Listening to your filthy mouth, I don't care but as
long as I am gonna give you the time of day don't bash me.
MARVIN
Fine, hey look there are still seats
at the front of the bus how 'bout you go up there(whispering threat) or
I am gonna bust you at the knees and cut every one of your grubby little
finger tips off with a pipe cutter. Got it?
SKATER KID
Yeah-
MARVIN
And if you look at me, even a glance
from up there I swear I will kill you, and my dad is lawyer. You know what
that means?
SKATER KID
No what?
MARVIN
I will get away with it, and don't
even think about being found, cause I know the best hiding spot in this
here city. So get your dirty little stinky ass up there.
SKATER KID
I'm gonna kick your ass, so get your
crew to watch your back, cause the last punk to mess with me, well his
nasty self turned up in a back ally hanging from a wire.
MARVIN
Oh I should fear a big tough guy like
you, big and tough. I don't even think your worth the time, you little
punk.
Marvin pushes the Skater Kid.
MARVIN
Move it, your filthing up my area.
The kid looks up at the pull rope and
pulls it, he gets off at the next stop, we cut to a shot of Marvin's mouth
and he is smiling.
3. EXT. DOWNTOWN. LATE MORNING:
We watch Marvin walking down a strip.
He walks fast and walks into WIMPY'S DINER.
4. INT.WIMPY'S DINER . LATE MORNING:
We have the camera sitting across the
table from Hogan, one of Marvin's best friends. He sits and looks at his
watch. We then cut to a shot of Marvin walking into the diner, and then
walking back to meet Hogan.
MARVIN
Hey.
He sits down.
HOGAN
Yeah, hey.
MARVIN
I can't believe the guts in the little
kids these days, I almost got my ass kicked by a ten year old, mouthy jerk.
HOGAN
They should go through smack therapy.
MARVIN
So what's up?
HOGAN
She dumped me, the lousy bitch dumped
me.
MARVIN
She did? Why?
HOGAN
Said I a bit of a problem.
MARVIN
What kind of problem? A psychological
problem?
HOGAN
No, well I don't know if it is or not,
but she said that I'm too stupid. I don't think of myself as that but I
also know I am not the brightest bulb in the basket.
MARVIN
No your not. But she dumped you because
of that?
HOGAN
So she says. Cheap? I think so.
MARVIN
The hell with her. You know how good
you had it right?
HOGAN
Yeah, she was like, everything under
the sun to me. I think I loved her, I would have waited a hundred years
to spend a day more with her, I saw my self being able to grow old with
her.
MARVIN
Real sweet Hogan. but you must realize
something, you would have had very ugly kids, but not to ugly. You see
it is all in genetics.
HOGAN
And what the hell do you know about
genetics?
MARVIN
Oh so very much. Observe. You are not
pretty, you are actually down right ugly, she on the other hand is very
pretty, now two pretties make a beautiful child, one pretty and one ugly
make a okay, but nothing special, and if she was ugly it would have been
a bitch bastard, now this may seem a little complex but your child, would
have been beaten many time with the ugly stick, therefore it would be down
right ugly. So in the long run your lucky you didn't have a kid with her.
HOGAN
I sure can count on you for a ego boost.
MARVIN
Well that's what best friends are for.
HOGAN
She said I should just let it go, she
said I was never anything special to her. I just don't understand.
MARVIN
I do.
HOGAN
Thanks.
MARVIN
So you here who she is after now?
HOGAN
Well rumors have it, that Blue is her
fellow.
MARVIN
Your band mate? I thought you and Blue
where like peas and carrots?
HOGAN
As did I. I guess I need to show that
bastard a lesson. Do you think I should do something about this whole thing?
MARVIN
Yes forget about it, or you could kill
blue but what would that solve?
We see an odd look appear on Hogan's
face.
MARVIN
You okay?
HOGAN
I think I'm going to kill Blue, I have
a gun.
MARVIN
Your to wussy to pull the trigger.
HOGAN
Oh?
MARVIN
You are joking, aren't you?
HOGAN
I think that's for you find out.
MARVIN
Anyway's, so are you still coming out tonight?
HOGAN
What are we doing?
MARVIN
Well my fridge is full of beer....
HOGAN
Yeah, I'm up drinking away my sadness.
MARVIN
Great, be at my place around eight.
HOGAN
Fine, but are your parents home?
MARVIN
No. But we are gonna go to the park
to do it.
HOGAN
So no worries?
MARVIN
Nope.
HOGAN
Fine, I'm going. Need to get some stuff
off my chest.
MARVIN
Hang on, I busted my butt to get down
here and you talk to me for a minute and leave?
HOGAN
Well I just needed to get it off my
chest.
MARVIN
Aren't you gonna eat?
HOGAN
Just finished breakfast next door.
MARVIN
Okay then, I think I'm gonna kick back
and grab something to eat here.
HOGAN
Okay, see ya.
Hogan gets up and leaves, we cut to
a shot of Marvin sitting at the table by himself.
5. EXT. DOWNTOWN. AFTERNOON:
We see Marvin at a payphone. He dials
a number.
MARVIN
Hello, is Jeff there?........Hey Jeff what's up?...
Yeah I'm on a pay phone downtown, but
I'm kinda bored wanna hang out for a bit? We could hang out at your house.......Okay
cool I'll see you there .....oh yeah, you'll be home.....okay I'll see
you around one?......Great, catch you later.
We watch Marvin walk off.
6. EXT. JEFF'S HOUSE. AFTERNOON:
Marvin is at the front door of Jeff's
house, he rings the doorbell and the door opens. We see Jeff standing there
in his pajamas.
MARVIN
Hey.
JEFF
What the hell do you want?
MARVIN
Remember I here to hang with the Jeff
man.
JEFF
Well you just woke me up.
MARVIN
Sorry, but I called you fiftenn minutes
ago.
JEFF
Did we talk about this?
MARVIN
Yes!
JEFF
I guess I forgot, shit.
MARVIN
Well better get ready.
JEFF
So what are we doing?
MARVIN
Just hanging out.
JEFF
Okay, come on in, I'm just gonna take
a shower.
MARVIN
I'm just gonna watch some T.V.
JEFF
Fine, just don't make a mess.
MARVIN
Yeah.
Marvin walks up into Jeff's TV room.
He turns on the TV and is watching ART ATTACK.
7. EXT. DOWNTOWN BENCH. AFTERNOON:
We see Tyson and Blue sitting on a
park bench.
BLUE
So what's up for today?
TYSON
Well we could hunt down Hogan and see
if he wants to jam, we could go to Jeff's house, herd Marvin is gonna be
there.
BLUE
Really?. So have you got an idea for
a band name yet? I mean, the band has bin together for over a year now,
we still call ourselves A Band, it sucks. And I need to get a new guitar,
mine don't stay in tune worth a shit, but the other day I saw the one I
want, the guitar that I have been searching for all my life. It was in
the pawn shop.
TYSON
The pawn shop, a place where crooks
and low life's bring in the crap they stole, or don't want, get ripped
off for it, then the pawn shop turns around and sells the stuff for ten
bucks less then the original value, ask me your better off getting yourself
a new ax, you get a warranty, free stings, a free tune up, and a hell of
a discount on a hard shell.
BLUE
So.
TYSON
Just thought you may want to know.
BLUE
Well I didn't.
TYSON
Okay.
BLUE
Fine.
TYSON
Fine.
8. INT. JEFF'S HOUSE. AFTERNOON.
We see Nat, Marvin and Jeff sitting
in a room, Jeff is eating a bowl of cereal.
MARVIN
I can't believe you eat that stuff.
JEFF
Why?
MARVIN
It's pure crap, it has like, nothing
in it.
JEFF
Oh sure it does, real fruit.
MARVIN
Real fruit names, but I haven't herd
of a coco-berry.
JEFF
There from South America.
MARVIN
Deep in the jungle of Coco.
JEFF
Hey listen, I let yo in, so be nice
to me!
MARVIN
Yeah, so, what have you been up to?
JEFF
Just working on some filming, I have
a real sweet peice of work comming up.
MARVIN
Cool, what's it about?
JEFF
A guy and his dragon.
MARVIN
Yeah? How are you amking the dragon?
JEFF
Highdrolics, and robotics.
MARVIN
Gonna be shopping at Radio Shack, eh?
JEFF
There not who you think......
MARVIN
What?
JEFF
Always wanting that stuff, name, address,
birthday....... ever think about that?
MARVIN
It's to put you on a mailing list.
We zoom in on Jeff's eyes and mouth,
freaky music is herd.
JEFF
Last night I was...taken. It was about
three in the morning, I was waked up by a sound, first I thought it was
that weird noise my closet makes but then I realized what it was.
MARVIN
WHAT?!
JEFF
It was the Mars Men, they came to poke
at my no parts, probe me, steal my thoughts and dreams, I was put on a
table with nothing on except a sheet, as I kicked and screamed I knock
off one of the heads, it revealed not an alien but a Radio Shack Manager.
I always knew it was them, wanting all that info on you! Think about it,
they stalk us, one battery? I think they implant microchips behind our
ears and stalk us, I isn't other life forms it's Radio Shackies! Look!
We see a microchip behind his ear.
They stuck it to me.
MARVIN
Don't you mean socked it to you?
JEFF
Oh they did that too! Nice music, funky.
9. EXT. A FIELD. AFTERNOON.
We see Hogan laying in a field, he
is just gazing upon the sky. His eyes are closed, they suddenly open, he
smiles.
10. INT. JEFF'S HOUSE. AFTERNOON.
Jeff and Marvin are talking.
MARVIN
So they got you, eh?
JEFF
You don't believe me do you?
MARVIN
Not, well, I guess I could, but it
is kinda hard to swallow.
JEFF
Yeah, but think of-
Jeff drops to the ground and starts
to shake, a foamy drool starts to froth around his mouth. His eyes role
back in his head. He starts to improvise some gibberish and then comes
back to normal and stands up. He begins talking like nothing ever happened.
JEFF
-it I shouldn't be believing myself,
but I am.
MARVIN
What just happened there?
JEFF
What?
MARVIN
You just fell on the ground and started
to have a seizure type of thing.
JEFF
No I didn't.
MARVIN
I know what I saw. I saw it.
JEFF
Really?
MARVIN
Yeah you dropped on the ground and
started to shake and drool, you talked in a weird language and I think,
no I know that you where not talking in any human language.
JEFF
Wow, that means this wasn't a hoax.
MARVIN
What do you mean?
JEFF
Well it was a fib, I made that Radio
Shack story up.
MARVIN
I wouldn't have known.
JEFF
So I placed this MONDEX chip behind
my ear. I think it is the chip that gave me that seizure.
11. DOWNTOWN PARK BENCH. AFTERNOON
We see Tyson and Blue sitting at the
same bench a few scenes ago.
TYSON
I'm gonna get a piece of pizza.
BLUE
See ya.
TYSON
You ain't coming?
BLUE
No, I'll just stay out here and freeze
my ass off.
TYSON
So your coming?
BLUE
No, but could you get me a piece?
TYSON
Yeah, but pay up the money, I ain't
made outta the sweet stuff you know! Now give me the money before I change
my mind not to but your lazy ass some pie.
BLUE
Yup.
He reaches in his pocket and pulls
out some change. This is done very slow.
TYSON
Okay granny Matilda, hurry up, my balls
are gonna drop off any minute now!
BLUE
Here! Meat I want meat!
TYSON
Your gonna get some meat off my knuckles if you don't
smarten up, asswipe. Now you gave me
a buck fifty, I charge fifteen cents for the run, and ten for the delivery.
Blue hands him some more change, Tyson
looks at it and puts his hand out for some more.
BLUE
What?
TYSON
A tip.
BLUE
The hell your getting one.
Tyson looks at Blue. Throws the eye
of evilness, Blue gives him some more change.
TYSON
Pleasure doin' business with ya, Baby
Blue!
Tyson walks of down the street and
out of site. Blue stays on the bench and moves around so his arms are in
his coat. We cut to a shot of inside of Blue's coat. We here a voice. It's
Hogan.
HOGAN
Get up, Blue.
BLUE
(inside the coat)
Why, what do you want?
HOGAN
You, I am going to have to kill you,
Blue. With my gun. Which is now in my pocket.
BLUE
Ha ha, now get lost before I kick your
dorky ass.
HOGAN
Up.
BLUE
No.
HOGAN
Up.
BLUE
No.
HOGAN
Down.
BLUE
Yes.
HOGAN
Down.
BLUE
Yes.
HOGAN'
Up.
BLUE
Ye-- NO!
HOGAN
Dammit, I thought I had you!!
BLUE
What the hell do you have a gun for?
HOGAN
To kill you.
BLUE
So do you want jam later today?
HOGAN
I know it was you.
BLUE
What was me?
HOGAN
MESSIN WITH MY BITCH!
Hogan jams the gun into Blue.
Now get the freak up, before I get
you...with my gun.
BLUE
I wouldn't touch that thing with a
fifty foot pole.
Hogan becomes more aggressive with
the jabbing of the gun. Blue gets up and they walk away with Hogan pointing
the gun at Blue through his jacket. They walk off.
12.EXT. DOWNTOWN BENCH. AFTERNOON
We see the empty bench where Tyson
and Blue where sitting. We hear Tyson singing a song. We see him walking
up with a piece of pizza hanging out of his mouth and one in the other
hand.
TYSON
Baby Blue, where are you? Well if you
don't come back I'm gonna eat your piece of pie. Yum, yum. Fine there,
It is gonna be gone, in my tummy!
We watch him eat the pizza.
13.INT. BUS. AFTERNOON
We see Hogan sitting beside Blue on
the bus, he is not talking but keeps the gun jammed in Blue's side.
BLUE
Where are we going?
HOGAN
Let your soul ride the bus with no
weight on it, free yourself my child, kudos to it, kudos.
BLUE
Okay Hogan what the hell is up, I think
I should start to worry now, tell me.
HOGAN
Free your mind, Blue. I know you know
what you did wrong. I will make it all better, you will thank me that I
have cleansed you of your filthiness, oh god the dirt.
BLUE
Is this about Ronnie?
HOGAN
One, yes! Two, her name is Veronica,
not Ronnie, that is an Archie name, and that comic sucks! Oh yeah big boy.
BLUE
Oh so it is. Well she was a nice--
HOGAN
Shut -up about that, don't make Hogan
get angry!
BLUE
What is Hogan gonna do?
HOGAN
Hogan will kill you! Oh yes I think
that just may be the solution to this plethora of problems. I will come
out on top.
In the word top Hogan makes the P known.
BLUE
So you are going to kill me?
HOGAN
Hush.
They are silent.
BLUE
Okay, I'm going.
HOGAN
Hush, Blue. Feel the vibrations.
BLUE
The ones on the bus.
HOGAN
No! The spirits. Buzz, buzz, buzz.
Hogan starts to do a little arm wave,
the dance.
BLUE
What the hell are you doing.
HOGAN
Are you a free-rider?
BLUE
I'm not, I think I'm not.
HOGAN
When will you know?
BLUE
I don't know, what the hell is going
on?
HOGAN
Free-rider, take it easy, varoom, varoom.
Hogan starts to drive, shifter and
all.
BLUE
Oh yeah?
HOGAN
I'll have a skull shifter, spikes on
my brush-bar, varoom, guns, and missals. Kaboom!!! Chucka, chukca. Pow,
bang, bang.
BLUE
Okay, are you okay? I really am starting
to worry.
HOGAN
Lets get off here.
BLUE
Why here, there's nothing but a field.
HOGAN
It is time.
BLUE
Time for what?
HOGAN
The sacrifice.
BLUE
Oh, God.
They get off and walk to the road through
the feild.
14.INT. JEFF'S HOUSE. AFTERNOON.
We see Jeff and Marvin in a tool workshop.
They are looking around for something. Marvin picks up a pair of pliers.
MARVIN
Maybe these will work.
JEFF
I just can't believe it didn't come
off with a bit of water, but no I get a shock.
MARVIN
Here just let me give it a try, what's
the worst that could happen?
JEFF
The left side of my head won't have
any skin.
MARVIN
Well it's better then the seizures.
JEFF
I don't know about them though!
MARVIN
So you just want to leave it on?
JEFF
Well it's an idea.
MARVIN
Okay, situation, you are at the movies
with a group of friends, the night is going great, until.... you drop on
the ground and have one of those seizures, the movie people call 9-11 you
are rushed to the hospital, the night is gone down the tube.
JEFF
Well my friends would understand that
it wasn't my fault, therefore no hard feelings.
MARVIN
Okay, situation two you are taking
your dog for a walk, on a busy street, you drop down and the seizure happens,
your dog runs off.
JEFF
I have cats.
MARVIN
Okay, um..., got it, you and the girl
of your dreams are on the perfect date, you go back to your house and your
parents aren't home, you two go upstairs.....
JEFF
Pull the damn chip off!!!!
MARVIN
Great.
15.EXT. A FIELD. AFTERNOON
We see Hogan and Blue walking up a
road to a field, he still has the gun jammed into Blue's side.
BLUE
Okay, what the hell is up with this?
HOGAN
I will free you from the sins, let
you become whole again. Feel it, feel it, ride the wave to the never ending
plethora Willis..
BLUE
Okay, before you do what ever your
going to do I want you to know one thing, I did not steal you girlfriend,
she told me that she dumped you because you where a little horn-dog, stupid,
and well, many others I won't tell you due to the situation.
HOGAN
Have you had your way with her?
BLUE
That is none of your business.
HOGAN
Oh? I would beg to differ.
BLUE
You've lost it!
He starts to walk away. Hogan trips
him and Blue falls in the snow. He looks up at Hogan. We cut to a shot
of Blue's point of view.
HOGAN
Listen, your on Hogan's time. Hogan's time is special time, nobody messes with it.
BLUE
You have bloody lost it! Get away from
me!
Blue tries to push Hogan away, but
Hogan pulls out the gun and points it in Blue's face.
16.EXT. BENCH DOWNTOWN. AFTERNOON
We see Tyson sitting there finishing
up the pizza, he looks around and stands up.
TYSON
Blue? I come back for you but you ain't
here? I think your not respecting old Tyson, like you should. What is I
gonna do?
17.INT. JEFF'S HOUSE. AFTERNOON
Jeff and Marvin are still in the workshop.
MARVIN
I can't believe it isn't coming off.
JEFF
Well, I just used normal PVA glue.
MARVIN
Your watching to much art attack.
JEFF
Yeah I know.
The phone rings in the other room they
walk over to it. It rings again and they look at each other in an odd way
as if something is up. Third ring Jeff picks it up.
JEFF
Hello?........Uh my MONDEX card, yeah
I got it...
They throw looks at each other, looks
of fear.
JEFF contd.
Uh no I don't think so, defective?
I don't think I will be able to bring it in......no, not today........what
do you mean I have twenty-four hours to live?.....I didn't do anything
to you guys.......hello?....hello? They hung up.
MARVIN
They really don't like you messing
around with the cards do they. I think we should take some stronger action
here, I am going to go find out some information on these things, and I
have to hunt down Hogan, he still needs some comforting.
JEFF
Why?
MARVIN
She dumped him.
JEFF
Really I thought they had a strong
relationship.
MARVIN
Well they did, but they don't anymore,
she said he was stupid. I bet he is in the field just thinking I should
go see what he is up to.
Marvin walks out the door and down
the street. We cut to a shot of Jeff's face, we here him drop to the ground.
18.EXT. STREET, AFTERNOON
We see Marvin walking down a sidewalk
whistling.
19.EXT. FIELD. AFTERNOON
We here some real freaky sacrifice
music. We see a shot of Hogan holding a gun to Blue's head, Blue is on
his knees with his back turned to Hogan. We cut to a shot of there faces
the body language will tell all. We cut to a shot of the same view, but
much further away.
20.EXT. SIDE WALK. AFTERNOON
We see Marvin trip and fall in a pile
of snow.
MARVIN
SHIT!
The little Skater Kid pops out of a pile of snow and looks down at Marvin.
MARVIN
You little Rat Bastard!
SKATER KID
Oh? Let's go!
Marvin picks up the Skater Kid and
throws him in the snow.
MARVIN
So how does Bad Ass like that?
The Skater Kid sits in the snow.
SKATER KID
Lethal. I'm that! True to dat!
MARVIN
Yeah well get a life you little shit.
The Skater Kid picks up a hunk of yellow
snow.
MARVIN
Holy Christ your sick, that is yellow
snow.
The Skater Kid looks at it and keeps
on eating it.
MARVIN
Get a life.
Marvin starts to walk away.
SKATER KID
Don't mess with me anymore!!!
21.EXT. FIELD. AFTERNOON
We see Marvin walk up the field, he
see's Hogan in the field with Blue, we cut to a improvised sacrifice with
Du Hast on. We see Marvin eyes in horror as Hogan shoots Blue in the head,
the blood sprays allover Hogan's face, he starts a girlish freak out from
the blood on his face. We watch Blue fall face first into the snow, we
see this at many angles, it repeats itself about five times. Hogan drops
to his knees, we cut to a shot of doves flying from a town square. We cut
to Marvin walking up to Hogan slowly, he is staring at the gun, we cut
to a shot of Marvin's eyes, then the gun.
MARVIN
Hogan, put the gun on the ground.
HOGAN
(singing)
Let me put in the picture, let me show
you what I mean, Blue is a dirty bastard, he ain't no king or queen.
MARVIN
I also had that dream.
HOGAN
Say it ain't so?
MARVIN
Really, now put the gun down.
HOGAN
But why?
MARVIN
Uh....it is the bad thing that makes
people do bad things, and we don't want that now do we?
HOGAN
Oh I think we do. Now as I see it I
am at the dominant level right now.
MARVIN
Because you have a gun.
HOGAN
That's right because I have a gun,
Hogan has a gun. Is he dangerous? I think so.
MARVIN
Okay Hogan you have really flipped
out what? I don't know but put the gun down and we can talk.
HOGAN
I think I am going to make a rug out
of Blue.
We cut to a shot of Blue's dead body.
MARVIN
You killed him!
HOGAN
It was a sacrifice, Hogan did it.
MARVIN
I am well aware that you did it, but
why.
HOGAN
He messed with my bitch!
MARVIN
Okay, put the gun down and we can talk.
Hogan starts to set the gun down and
looks up at Marvin.
MARVIN
Trust me Hogan, I don't want anything
bad to happen, I have nothing on me.
HOGAN
Yeah?
MARVIN
Yeah.
Hogan set the gun down. He sits in
the snow. Then he pats the ground and calls Marvin over.
HOGAN
Come Marvin, the ground is nice. Sit
and talk to Hogan.
MARVIN
Sure.
Marvin walks over to Hogan and sit
down.
MARVIN
So what's wrong?
HOGAN
All my life I have been a loner, destined
to walk this shadowed planet by myself. But then I found, Veronica. She
was the gal for me. I knew it from day one. Nothing could define her beauty,
the way her hair smelt after she took a shower, twas an organic experience.
MARVIN
So it is about her. And you thought Blue stole her from you, right?
HOGAN
I know, he was always eyeing her down,
but who could resist? No man with raging sexual drives could not sneak
the peek. But she was mine, I loved her Marvin. I knew it was always to
good to be true, but it was they way it was. God how I miss her.
MARVIN
Did she not dump you yesterday?
HOGAN
Yes.
MARVIN
Well then, talk to her about it.
HOGAN
She wouldn't talk to me, not after
what I did.
MARVIN
Why, what did you do?
HOGAN
Blue, remember?
MARVIN
Oh, yeah he's dead.
HOGAN
Look Marvin. I have killed a human,
me to much of a wuss, you said. But somehow, somewhere in this nerdy little
contraption I have going I managed to do it. I killed Blue.
MARVIN
You have to control your Id.
HOGAN
My what?
MARVIN
Your Id, a long time ago a guy by the
name of Sigmund Freud invented the Physcodynamic Learning Theory. The Id
is the I Want cravings the human brain wants. Now if you can balance your
Super Ego and Id your laughing, but until then I would recommend a mental
house to check into. Don't get me wrong, I am saying this as your friend,
do it for yourself.
HOGAN
Your right I do have problems.
MARVIN
Sure you do. Now get out in the real
world. Plenty of fish in the sea. You're the man.
HOGAN
I am the man!
MARVIN
Your are the bad mother fo.
HOGAN
O am, I'm b..b..b.bad to the bone!
MARVIN
Okay, so now you have to go to the
police station an tell them what you just did.
HOGAN
What?!?
MARVIN
It is the right thing, Hogan.
HOGAN
I have to face the man?
MARVIN
Yup.
HOGAN
But it wasn't me it was you!
MARVIN
Me?
HOGAN
You killed Blue! You bastard!
MARVIN
Hogan, you killed him.
HOGAN
Marvin, I beg to differ.
MARVIN
Well, I don't I saw it happen from
the road.
HOGAN
So it wasn't me?
MARVIN
Yes it was! You killed Blue. I am not
taking the blame, Hogan.
HOGAN
Well I guess I will have to kill you
as well, since you saw it and all.
MARVIN
Not, now.
Marvin reaches for the gun and gets
it, he points it at Hogan. We watch Hogan pull a mini pistol out of his
boot.
HOGAN
Again, Hogan is the one on top.
MARVIN
With that thing?
HOGAN
Well, it has bullets.
The looks back and forth are going
on, we see Hogans finger tighten on the trigger, Marvin is very scared.
We suddenly see Hogan drop to the ground and Jeff is standing behind him
with a shovel.
MARVIN
Wow, thanks man.
JEFF
My little chip can tell the future.
MARVIN
So you knew about this?
JEFF
Oh did I ever. The talk and everything.
MARVIN
You saved my life, I don't know how
to repay you.
JEFF
Don't worry about it.
Jeff starts to walk away, Marvin looks
puzzled.
MARVIN
Jeff!
Jeff turns around.
JEFF
Yeah?
MARVIN
Wait are you doing tonight?
22.EXT. PARK. NIGHT
We see many beer bottles lying on the
ground we here Marvin, and Jeff laughing in the background. They are drunk.
We see them lying on the ground looking at the stars.
MARVIN
That was some crazy shit this afternoon.
JEFF
I was like Chuck Norris, man. The king.
Jeff stands up and does some Karate
moves. Marvin throws a snowball at him and he drops to the ground like
a rock. He does an army crawl back over to Marvin.
MARVIN
Yeah. I was like ready to piss myself,
it would have froze and made my pants hard....and yellow.
They laugh.
JEFF
One time a dog pissed on my leg, and
I had to walk home in like one hundred below weather-
MARVIN
Naw?
JEFF
Yeah, when I got home my jeans where
like a board, it was some crazy shit. So these stupid little french kids
that live behind me got them in the side of the head, I herd they had to
go to emergency for stitches.
MARVIN
Hey, man.
JEFF
What?
MARVIN
Nice shot.
We cut to a shot of Hogan walking through
the park towards them, he has his big bad gun in his hand.
JEFF
Yeah it was, those retards. I think
I'm gonna go home and kick their asses.
MARVIN
Cool.
We see watch Hogan get closer. We cut
to Hogans point of view, it is like an animal in a bush. He snarls and
grunts.
MARVIN
So I was once on this Hockey team,
and I got this guy in a headlock on the ice, he started to punch me in
the gut, but I knocked him upside the head about five times. So then he
starts to cry. So I let go of him. He skates off to the bench and calls
me a name, with words that are bad. So I pull out a Rambo knife out of
my shinpad and skate over to him, then I stabbed him in the back.
JEFF
Really?
MARVIN
No, but it was a cool story.
JEFF
If that happened to me I would have like pulled out a gun, a sawed off double barrel rifle, blown the pecker away. None of that crap.
MARVIN
Well I am not known for my nice guy side. In grade three I stabbed a chick with scissors, she bled to death in the class, she was sitting at her desk for like half the day before the teacher found her.
JEFF
Wow, that was cool.
MARVIN
And when I was in kindergarten, I blew a guys arm off,
cause he went in to the Tent, when it was my time.
JEFF
Really?
MARVIN
No.
Pause.
MARVIN
Well tonight sure has been a smash. Hogan would have liked it.
JEFF
Yeah.
The just sit there and start to sing "War, huh, what is it good for? Absolutely nothing". We watch Hogan creep up. He is drooling with rage. He the gun down the front of his pants (crotch area).
HOGAN
Helloooo boooiiieeess!
MARVIN
Shit.
Marvin tries to stand up but he falls
down the hill. Jeff lays on the ground laughing. Hogan walks up to Jeff,
we cut to a shot of Marvin's view from the bottom of the hill, Hogan shoots
Jeff five times, we hear Jeff laugh.
JEFF
Shit! That kinda hurt man.
HOGAN
Die!!!!
MARVIN
No!
Hogan starts to walk down the hill,
Marvin's attempts to get up several times but keeps falling down.
MARVIN
Damn I hate you beer!!
HOGAN
Become one of the free, let your spirit
ride the train. Toot, toot.
Hogan points the gun at Marvin.
MARVIN
Jeff? Help me please.
We see Jeff's body roll down the hill
and land beside Marvin, he has a bullet hole in the head.
MARVIN
Oh shit!
HOGAN
Good bye Marvin, ol' chap.
We cut to a shot of Tyson at the top
of the hill with a G.T Snowracer. He rides it down the hill and takes Hogan
out by the feet. Hogan drops to the ground and the guns goes flying. Tyson
jumps and does a somersault and catches the gun before it hits the ground.
He roles up to Hogan on one knee.
TYSON
Listen, nobody messes with one of my
pals.
HOGAN
What? Who? Where am I?
TYSON
Playing stupid are we? Well let me
show you what Tyson is all about. No feel the pain, feel it, ride the CABOOSE!
Tyson shoots a shot, he misses at point
blank range. The gun is now out of bullets. He starts to drop kick Hogan.
Kicks him in the side, lays a few to the head. He picks up Hogans arms
and drags him, as he is walking off he looks at Marvin.
MARVIN
Thanks, man.
Marvin passes out. We cut to Tyson
on a road not far form the hill.
TYSON
Well, Hogan, when you wake up you are
going to find out what Tyson is all about. And if you don't like it, too
damn bad.
CUT TO: CREDITS
23.EXT. PARK. MORNING.
We see Marvins passed out body lying
in the snow. The Skater Kid walks up and releaves himself on Marvin.
MARVIN: He is your everyday teen, he
ends up helping people even when he doesn't want to, he won't tell them
though. He is the main character.
JEFF: A very odd individual, he spends
his spare time reading Archie, and working on UFO hoaxes. He is one of
Marvin's closes pals.
HOGAN: Labeled as a nerd his whole
life until that special age. He had the best girl in the town, and when
he lost her all his mind and soul went to a bag of smashed assholes.
BLUE: Just a guy who is one of the
social highs in the group. He has rarely ever faced a problem in his life
but when Hogan goes all glory, he has more on his plate than he can handle.
TYSON: Thinks he is big and bad. But
is the one always asking his mommy to kill the spider on the wall. But
when the time comes to defend his friends he turns on the Mr. Hyde and
becomes a ruthless killing machine.
NAT: Just one of Marvin's very close
friends, almost sister.
SKATER KID: A little dirty Rat Bastard.
VERONICA: A good looking, popular,
bitch.