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Violent
Winds (Sailoruranus shrine) Rating: 1.5 out of 3
What first impressed me was the layout. It's really pretty,
and it loads really fast too. The owner says this page looks best with
MSIE, but it looks really good with Netscape too - I couldn't find any
major difference between the way it looked in the two browsers.
The info is accurate and in-depth, separated in anime
and manga sections: it even includes a small page about the other three
Outer Senshi. I'd suggest to move the link to the Outer Senshi info on
the main page for information, since it's valid for both. Haruka's personality
analysis could be better developed, and her role in the seasons that follow
the third is pretty much overlooked (both in anime and in manga). Also,
in general the narration of events is quite short, and could be better
developed. In the manga section, Uranus' attacks and henshin were not listed.
Let's move on to galleries... pictures are few, none
I hadn't already seen, but they are of a good quality and the owner did
scan in all of them herself. Both in music section and in movies/animated
.gifs section, most of the content isn't related to Sailoruranus; I'd suggest
deleting the things that aren't related to the theme of the shrine, and
using the space for some other movie or music file. There is a section
for fanart; another section contains some essays in which are related the
thoughts of Haruka as perceived by the owner of the page: they're quite
good, but I wish they were longer and more in-depth.
There are some tense and spelling errors throughout the
site.
In general, this is a good Sailoruranus shrine, with
some really nice ideas, but there's a lot of room for improvement and developement.
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