"Read Between the Lines" by Christie Gibson

She says she hates him
   She loves him
She says he's one of her best friends
   That's not what she wants
She says he's conceited and self-centered
   She doesn't think so
She says he's ugly
   She wants him so much
She encourages others to like him
   She wants him for herself
She says she doesn't care
   She notices everything
She wants people to believe her act
And most of them do

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