Me and My
Brother
My Brother's
essay
Ninad Desai
English Cranston.
1/28/1997
Down Syndrome
In 1866, the medical superintendent of the Earlswood Asylum for Idiots
in
London, Dr. John Langdon Haydon Down, published a paper describing some
of
the characteristics of Down Syndrome, which today bears his name. He
reported Observations on the ethnic classification of idiots, that
established the eponym, and misguided the following generations of
scientists and physicians. His diagnosis of idiocy became a
self-fulfilling
propesy, for most patients languished in institutions lacking adequate
educational and medical programs. Now more than one hundred years later,
we
refer this condition as Down Syndrome, and have higher expectations both
medically and educationally for these children.
Down syndrome is a chromosomal disorder affecting about 1-1000 live
births and usually causing delays in physical and intellectual
development.
These delays are due to the presence of additional genetic material in
the
cells. Instead of having 46 chromosomes in each of their cells, a person
with Down syndrome has 47 chromosomes. The extra chromosome is a number
21
which may come from either the egg or the sperm. It is thought that
during
cell division of a sperm or an egg, the number 21 chromosomes do not
separate properly. Thus, one cell will have an extra number 21.
Therefore
it is also called Trisomy21. Approximately 95% of cases of Down Syndrome
cases are Trisomy 21.The other 5% cases are called Translocation and 3%
of
the cases are called Mosaicism. With increased maternal age, the
incidence
of occurrence of Down Syndrome birth increases but 80% of these children
are born to women under the age of 35. Down Syndrome is not related to
race, nationality, religion or socio-economic status.
Down Syndrome individuals have characteristic (phenotype) features so
usually one can recognize the Syndrome by looking at the person. They
have
slanted eyes, short (pug) nose, small ears, open mouth, and short neck.
They are usually short with a protuberant abdomen and an awkward gait.
The
degree of mental retardation varies from normal to mild to moderate to
severely retarded. It makes me mad that just this little chromosome
causes
such a big problem.
There are a lot of myths about Down Syndrome. The literature of Down
syndrome has exaggerated the homogeneity of this population, despite the
evidence for increased variation of many characteristics. The belief is
in
limited variability, and that people with Down syndrome reach a cut off
point in adolescence, beyond which further development is not possible.
This myth of Down Syndrome uniformity has persisted for a variety of
reasons because until quite recently, there has been relatively little
systematic research done. Of the many stereotyped characteristics,
mental
deficiency has been given so much emphasis. This is wrong. That is just
like saying that someone is dumb because of their race, and then trying
to
make it a fact. Over the years, advanced medical science, improved
educational systems, considerably greater social acceptance of people
with
disabilities in the community, and continuous efforts of the NDSC (National Down Syndrome Congress ) and the NDSS (
National Down Syndrome Society) working toward the goal of normalization
of
this population, has almost deinstitutionalized patients with Down
Syndrome
in the USA. In fact, there is a waiting list for the adoption of these
children in the USA. Today Down syndrome children are in inclusion
educational systems with typical peers from elementary through high
school.
There is so much more to these children than their disabilities. They
can teach us things that we never knew. They might not be as bright as
some
of us, but they can be more caring and loving than us. I know this for a
fact because my brother has Down Syndrome. He might not be a genius,
but
he is not dumb. I have always noticed how he always thinks of everyone
else
before himself. He cares about everyone and tries hard to be like his
older
brother. He isn't just a bump on a log either. He is probably more
involved
in activities than most students are at our school. He is a freshman in
the
same school where I am a senior. He plays four instruments: violin,
piano,
clarinet, and bass clarinet since 4th grade and is good at them. He is
in
high school orchestra, band, and choir. He is at red belt-black tip
level
at Tae Kwon Do, (Martial arts) and has won medals in state championship
tournaments. He does alpine skying, swimming, and runs track with normal
children. He uses the computer very well for his homework and writes
E-mail to his friends, teachers and families who live abroad. He lives
life
just as a normal child would. It is just harder for him to deal with
math
concepts, money, and time. That is because of that one little extra
chromosome which affects the part of most of the Down Syndrome
individuals brain that deals with intellect, speech and memory . To me
it
does not seem fair at all !
I wanted to let you know Mrs. Cranston that I wrote this paper from
scratch. I decided to write about this subject because I was with my
brother the other day and I realized that next year I will be going away
to
college and I won't be there for him. I started to feel bad, but then I
thought that I shouldn't really feel bad because that is what most
people
do. He can take care of himself. People don't understand Down Syndrome,
so
I felt I should somehow start to tell others. I love my brother and I am
very proud of him for what he is.
Individuals with Down syndrome as well as with other disabilities are
first individuals. They have feelings, desires and dreams just like
normal individuals. Their parents and families have to work very hard to
advocate for them. They deserve the same rights as a normal person to
live
in a community. It takes extra time, kindness, and consideration to
understand their disability. If the teachers, medical professionals, and
the community they live in, follow this simple rule, the lives of Downs
Syndrome individuals can be much richer and the lives of all the normal
people will be richer for taking the time to know someone like my
brother.
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