Review #1: Star Goddess' Sailormoon Vortex
Author: PallaPalla
Overall statement: A large villains site with quite a bit to see and read.

I am not sure at all how I came to this site, but it turned out to be better than I thought. The main page is nice, except the title pic is hard to read, and the purple bars around the side and top don't really seem to serve a purpose...maybe if they connected, or were closer together, it might make more sense. It says it's better in MIE.... ::changes browsers:: well, the main page doesn't change except for those snazzy colour-changing links... cool. However, the pic of Neherenia (which is ADORABLE, BTW) is way too feathered-down. I can hardly see the face.
Hey, it's been updated recently! Cool.

Well, the character information page could use some modifying..there's so much scroling. Maybe some tables would help, or something. Also, you might make note of the <P ALIGN=JUSTIFY> tag which will even the text out over the space it covers, like on this page. However, the profiles are all there for the most part, which is an accomplishment since there are probably over 40 of them (they describe SM's villains). There are a few spelling/grammar errors scattered about the pages, and some have different layouts, which was odd. However, the information is quite informative and the author has obviously seen a lot of the series.

Mmm... pictures. Wow. There's a lot of stuff to see here...almost overwhelming. You might want to cut down on the pics so you can display each group on one page... ie, put all the Dark Kingdom pics on one page, etc. However I'm glad that you didn't put up thumbnails; at least the pages don't take forever to load.

Fanart - hmmm, one of the better page layouts. A rather...strange..picture of Fisheye as a mermaid, but very well done. ^^ It's rather unclear who did what on this page. It's all really good, though...wow.

Heeey, an Amazon Shrine..quite nice graphics, but again the layout is slightly lacking. Not really a big deal, though. Ew, except, Ziroconia is NOT sexy....ugh...::pukes::. ^_^ Some nice information on the Asteroids, Pallas, Vesta, Ceres and Juno...And a nice lil' shrine within a shrine to PallaPalla. She is so kawaii, ne? I love her too ^_^ And episode 153 was the cutest! ^^ Sorry, had a little "cute" fit there...Oh, and you might want to mention the age switch which PallaPalla caused, that was really funny. I also enjoyed the You Know You like PallPalla To Much When... list.

LOL, and a guide to taking over the world without getting stopped by the senshi. The author sounds like a bona fide villain when he/she writes this. (LOL, and don't hire a sidekick named Pinky! ^_^)

The multimedia section could use a better layout, but again it's not a big deal. There are plenty of sounds here, and rare ones at that. There are also a lot of Midis, more than I expected. I didn't even know there was a MIDI for Cooan's last battle. Cool. Also some kewl .mp3s, aaaand to top it off some animated gifs that are pretty neat. Altogether this section was great.

Fanfiction looks good...looks like the author is a pretty humourous person, which always helps. And then the links page looks pretty complete. Good job.

Hokay, so this page gets a plus in content and a neutral response in layout. I think the improvements might lie in the layout of the page, and also the amazon shrine could use some more stuff, but otherwise this page was a nice place to visit.

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