| This looks to be a nice lil' page,
and the title definetely caught my attention.
The entrance page is pretty good;
the graphics aren't that great, but the ones with the resolutions on them
are nice. What you could use is Paint Shop
Pro, I believe it has anti-aliased text, which is text that doesn't
look grainy. Might work in this situation.
Major points for having choices
for people with different screen resolutions ^^, however I don't know if
many people are using 1280 x 1024. The more common screen resolutions are
640 x 480 (bleehhh), 800 x 600, and a few people have 1024 x 768. Anyway,
I'll choose the 800 x 600.
We have frames that actually look
pretty nice, even though they don't serve much of a purpose. Ah, well,
don't take 'em out. ^_^ The main index-type page is fairly nice; the font
might be changed to Arial or Verdana, since those are the most common among
all computers. I don't really understand why there's separate logos for
the photo gallery and the ratings and rates pages, and I also would change
the text link colour, it's a bit hard to read. And on the image map, I
can't even see the green text,
I didn't even notice it for a while.
The intro page could use a black
background and change of font, also the link at the bottom gives me a frame
within a frame. You should link back to the frames index page so that another
frame doesn't open.
Umm, there's a background image
on the updates page but it's just black...but at least you've updated recently.
Another frame within a frame link. ^^;;
On the synopsis page, make the fonts
a LOT smaller. I dunno if it's supposed to be in Times New Roman or not,
but that font is getting really boring. And, um, in the North American
version, there was only the first season and then the American equivalent
or Sailormoon R. No Sailormoon S.
When using unusual fonts like Curlz
MT for titles, I'd recommend just making an image instead, since a lot
of people probably dont have the font.
The name page was interesting. ^_^
But again I'd change the font size.
Hmm...about four pages are down.
;_;
The title on the "contest zone"
is in black, I can't see it, and I can't see the links, they're purple.
There's a broken image, actually
a lot of broken images on the lyrics page.
You have some intersting free graphics,
I think you've gone pretty far with what seems to be a stinky image editor.
Again, I'd recommend Paint Shop Pro.
I like how the profiles have opinions
and stuff on them, rather than just stats. However, I would strongly discourage
mixing information from the North American version and the Japanese...they're
just not the same.
A lot of the links on the Chibi-usa
page are broken....actually, a lot of the links on the profiles are broken.
;_;
::wonders what "character assailments"
could possibly be:: There's a broken image on that page, BTW.
Ohh, they're attacks and transformations...rather
overdone. Almost all the pages I've seen have this type of thing.
The coloring book is kinda neat,
I like it, but it could definetely use some more pictures. ^_^
Ooohh, quotes. From the North American
version...certainly haven't seen that before. They were actually ok. The
other quotes were nice, too. (Except I don't really understand why the
logo on the non-SM quotes page has SM characters on it ^^;;)
The mailing lists page was helpful...eep.
There's a hidden MIDI on the awards page on Autostart. Pleeeeeaase don't
do this, it's annoying because I can't urn it off.
All in all, this page is getting
there. ^_^ I would suggest you take a look at my own help section, get
Paint Shop Pro, and pleeeeaaase fix all
the links that give me a frame within a frame. Remember, when you link
to a page that contains frames inside a frame, it makes more frames inside
the frames until I can't even read anything. Gah.
Also, originality is ALWAYS a good
thing here on the good ol' SM-Web. Try thinking of
a few original features for your
page, and the more you have the better your page will be.
^_^ Anyway, so far so good. |