| The main page looks to be pretty
well-coordinated, and it looks like there's a whole lot to do here. The
title pic looks a tad funny because it's not transparent; you can make
it transparent using Paint Shop Pro. The graphics are ok, but look deformed
on the sidebars. Still, it's cute and I like the background image. ^_^
I also like how it's not too cluttered. The text is a bit small, though.
It's also sorta weird how you have a picutre of Usagi holding a gun...
*L*
Ok, we'll now go through the features
one by one...
The game room is cute. I like the
idea, even though it was REALLY easy after seeing that silhouette of her.
^_^
Ok, the galleries are pretty and
have some nice pictures, but it takes forever for them to load. I would
recommend making a text list or thumbnails, because most of us are too
impatient to wait for it. ^_^ Also, the picture on Mercury's gallery...the
first one, in manga style with the flowers...that's not Ami, it's from
another Takeuchi manga series... ^_^ (I know, I got mixed up about that
too). But actually, there are some nice pictures in here that I haven't
seen before (and that, my friends, is really rare ^_^).
Setuna's Time Port was a fairly accurate
story, except that it mixed up the Japanese version and the DiC version
a lot. Princess Serena and Prince Endymion are from different stories;
Uranus and Neptune aren't even in the English version. Other than that,
though, I can't find anything else wrong with it.
Hey, a poetry section! Wow. That's
kinda neat. And the poems aren't bad, either. Ok, I'll actually give a
substantial compliment for once: they're GOOD. ^_^ (I mean that ^_^.) I
like the dark poetry and the weird poetry. ^_^
The bios are nice, if somewhat cliche,
and the layouts on them could use some work. I think they might look a
lot better if you used one of those corner-box layouts, if you know how
to make them. (They're not that hard, you can ask me about 'em if you need
help ^_^.) Also, Pluto's bio is almost impossible to read. It also seems
to be mixing the English version with the Japanese again, but I'd rather
you do that than write about something you don't know about.
Awww, the fanart is cute! It's not
bad, just a slightly different style. ^_^ I would recommend making separate,
small pictures for the thumbnails because when you resize them, the computer
still has to load the entire picture, just in a smaller space.
Also, the banner you have for your
page is so clever! I love the little milk-moustache Usagi ^_^.
The You Know You Love SailorMoon
yadda yadda was pretty funny...I don't really like the background image
on that page, but that's just me.
The text on the "about us" page is
hard to read because of the background image as well...however it's good
that you formatted the text.
The Sailor Nova page could use some
proofreading...the text is kinda smushed and weird. ^_^
I dunno if it was my computer or
what (I have a hunch it was) but the Elios fanclub page took forever to
load...the title pic looks sorta weird and the background is too. I like
the image map and the guestbook buttons, which could be adjacent rather
than taking up two lines. I also don't understand why there's a "member
of the Elios fanclub" badge on the page. I do like Elios, though... he
was pretty cool. ^_^
I'd put thumbnails in the gallery,
it takes a LONG time to load. Same with the Chibi/Elios gallery. That broke
my modem's connection about five times. ;_;
Anyway, this page is definetely getting
there. I'd say condense some of the stuff into a couple full pages - webrings,
clubs, pets, etc - and add some real substance. More opinions on the characters,
writings on the show and manga, et cetera. You're off to a good start ^_^.
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