Author: Lena
Review by: Chibiusa
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Content: **.5
Originality: ***.5 Design/layout: *** Technicality: **** Overall statement: This site is the first complete shrine to Kaolinite, and the author could take this many places. (The maximum amount of stars is five.) |
| My first impression of this site
was pretty good, and the rest of it follows up decently. The main page
has a nice structure to it, with a little bit of java. I love the title
image, the graphic work is very nice on this. However, around the picture
of Kaolinite and
the word images are choppy grey boxes, which can easily be fixed. Nicely done, though. The Other Mistress consists of 3
sections. The first is Information. The layout on this page is very plain
and simple, with just a border and a title image. It looks okay,
Second part: history. Another plain layout. The basic history of Kaolinite, very well written. It explains pretty much everything there is to know about Kaolinite! Just spice it up a little, maybe make a background to go with it. Next up: seiyuu. Same layout as before.. I won't repeat myself. ^^ Basic info, credit is given. Also, her opinion is included. Opinions are good! Hehe...hmm, looks like the seiyuu, Uemura Noriko, has played some MOTD's before! Interesting... The part "Qualities" is next. This expresses Kaolinite's personality, and the author notices things that I didn't while watching SMS. Very, very nice. Household: basic information on Tomoe Souichi, Tomoe Hotaru, and the Witches 5, the other people who lived in the house. Small pictures to go along with it- I'd suggest giving them each a border, so they're dressed up a little more. Hitlist: the people Kaolinite hates, including the Senshi and Viluy. Rather short, but explanative. Daimons: very cool! Great idea. There are some names and items missing, but that can easily be fixed. Note to Lena: I can get you some of the names, if you'd like the help. I just can't do it right now...^^;;. Moving on to the K Stuff section. Where to Find Her: links to places to buy subtitled videos. Good idea, very nice. Once again, I'd spice up these layouts a little bit. Image Gallery: 4 images at the moment. Pleeaassseee don't use the height and width tags to make thumbnails! I'd suggest making a table with a link to the image, and a description. Much less loading time. Fairly decent pictures, though. Multimedia: a few videos. Nice ones, though! Credit is given, well done. You don't see these every day. Fanworks: nothing there yet. Very understandable, however! Maybe I'll submit something... Moving on to the Site section. Credits: given where needed, no problems. Links: divided up into sections, very nice! I like the format. Link Exchanges: self-explanatory. Maybe a title image would be nice? Rings: broken link! *Aack* Must be fixed! ^_- Awards Won: once again, I'd do it the way I suggested the image gallery. A table would be much nicer. Instead of all of these plain white backgrounds, border backgrounds would be very nice, by the way. Link Me: ways to link. I like the button! Other Pages: links to her other sites. The p h a s e s idea sounds very nice! I say go through with it. I'm sure a lot of people would love it. Kaolinite.Com? ^^ About Me: Very nice, descriptive. Lena has almost as much anime as I do! ^^ I enjoyed reading. Overall, this site has a lot of potential. Spice up those layouts, advertise a little, and it'll be on its way to the top! |