The
dreaded introduction story, so much depends on establishing the Doctor from the get go.
There was also continuity to consider, the Valeyard namely. I decided that both should come into being at the same time, creating a noble and
heroic Doctor as well as an evil twin. This of course also played into the introduction
of the Doctors companions, David and Claire, pairing one off with each version of the Doctor initially before having both
hook up with the ‘real’ Doctor and helping her defeat her nemesis.
I
wanted to shake up continuity too, by having the Valeyard trying to bring forward the Yeti invasion of London a year, but ultimately
being foiled and not many people even noticing the lumbering hairy beasties.
I
imagined David and Claire as rather playful younger companions, kind of like Adric but likeable. The Doctor would like their youthful energy and she’d mother them terribly, bribing them with sweets
to behave and not get killed etc.
If
I had to change anything I’m not sure I would. I think the character we
see right from the beginning has stayed throughout, she may have changed her outfits a few more times than her previous selves
combined but she’s allowed to, she’s got taste!
A Fresh
Start wasn't the very first story I wrote featuring the 13th Doctor. What follows below is the very first sequence (which
fits in between 'A Fresh Start' and 'Sherwood's Most Wanted') featuring her and her two dear chums...
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END!
(Part
1)
"David,
Claire." The Doctor called for her companions. "Come and have a look at this." She pointed to the plasma display screen that
took up a whole wall of the six sided console room. The Doctor was dressed in a rather more unusual outfit than many
people might have expected. For a start a long flowing dress of dark greys and purples were a big clue. Over this she wore
a pale purple, red and blue paisley blouse with a red ribbon tied around and under the collar. She sported a wine red jacket
which had pockets crammed with many things, including a yo-yo and a half eaten bunch of grapes.
"What
is it Doctor?" David asked, full of curiosity. He prefered a simpler mode of dress, opting for a green t-shirt and black jeans
with one of the knees worn out.
"It
looks like a Rumerian space freighter unless I'm very much mistaken." She held the tips of her jacket lapels with her thumbs
and smiled. "Let's go and have a look around eh?" Her voice was filled with enhusiasm.
"Great
a dingy space ship." Claire groaned. "I bet a bar of galaxy and hazlenuts we get captured within five minutes." Claire sported
an all black 'goth' outfit that resembled a wedding dress in reverse. She had copied the look from one of the Doctor's many
enemies but she drew the line at a beard.
"I
have a toffee crisp that says we get lost in a maze of corridors before then." David stuck his tounge out at his bossy twin
sister.
"Well
we won't find out who's right staying in here will we."
They
materialised. "Last one out buys the sweets. The Doctor activated the door control and allowed her two chums to beat her to
the door again. They emerged to find themselves surrounded by a platoon of heavily armoured security types all pointing the
business end of their rifles at them.
"This,
is a rarity I must admit. Stay close you two."
"For
goodness sake get out of the way." A trooper rushed towards them, grabbed the Doctor by her arm and dragged her towards the
wall of guns. Another soldier retreived her companions.
"I
take it this reception isn't for me? Good I hate to start off on the wrong foot. I'm the Doctor." She smiled, showing her
ruby painted lips to full effect.
"What
the hell are you three doing here? This is a secure ship and this..." The man's hand swept in a large arc. "Is a Bug hunt."
"Oh,
well we just popped in for a spot of adventuring. You know how it is, exploring. Always after a new sight or place to discover."
"Er
yes ma'am."
"Doctor."
The Doctor prompted.
"I'm
afraid well have to evacuate our of the danger zone until the ship has been secured. Trooper Garvey."
A
seemingly identical looking security person appeared. "Yes Sarge."
"Take
these civvies put of here and give them some food and water if they need it."
"Yes
Sarge." Trooper Garvey escorted his new charges away from the others.
"I
must say It's been a while since I saw a body of men move that well."
"The
Sarge keeps a well trained squad."
They
had just passed a conveniently placed bulkhead when all kinds of alarms and gizmos started to sound. Strobe lights put on
a bit of colour not to be outdone. "Great, some excitement. Stay close now."
"Hull
breach." The security guard stated.
"We
should go and help, I'm rather good in a crisis."
"My
orders are to take you to a secure area and give you any basic comforts you need."
"I
suppose a seven course banquet is out of order mister." David joked.
There
was an ominous harsh breathing sound and the Doctor found her jacket was being ruined by blood, Garvey's blood. Something
had bitten his upperbody away.
"Claire,
David."
"What?"
They asked in unison.
"RUN!"
The Doctor wished she had worn flats instead of heels...
the rest of the story (written by others as well as myself) can
be found here...