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This is the site that I will actually put about all of my poems and storys on. I would much appreciate it if you didn't copy my work and sell it off as your own. Thanks and have a nice time reading. Keep in mind that this is a lot of my much older work. I don't really write anymore. I am more of a drawer.

THE MIDNIGHT NIGHTMARE

BY RACHEL (Keep in mind that I was 11 when I wrote this story)

It was the night of the halloween dance Jonathan Johnson and his two sisters Kelli and Heather had just got home when they started tinking of things to do when all of the sudden they heard a knock at the door but they didn't want to answer it. So they locked the door. While they waited for who ever it was to leave they snuck past the door to their bedroom. They were wandering if they should go to the phone and call their parents and tell them that they should come home or not. They decided that if they interuped them at the conference that they wouldn't let them go to the next dance. They decided that they weren't going to call their parents but instead call their friends and have them spend the night. Now Kelli wasn't sure that they shouldn't have friends spend the night, but she didnt say anything because she was a little scared of the person that was knocking at the door earlier. Then she got so scared that she started crying and she cried herself to sleep. Jonathan thought a little about the person that was knocking at the door. He thought that it was stupid that he was scared of the person that was knocking at the door. So he dicided to go to sleep. Then in the middle of the night they heard a loud crash. It was the loud soud of the window break. Then Heather and Kelli started to cry softly and they started getting crowed by their friends because thay were scared too. Then they saw the door knob turn then they got real scared. Then they saw a guy with a gun. They started to panic but Kelli told them that if they stay quiet maybe that the man wouldn't see them, but she knew that it wouldn't work. She has seen stuff like this happen on television before and always someone gets killed and that made her heart jump up in her throat. So she didn't want to see so she held her breath till she fainted. Kevin one of the friends was up and he was scared too but she felt now that it was now her only choice to go out of their hideing spot.

"Excuse me sir are you looking for something?" asked Kevin. "Come here or I will or you will be in very deep troble." said the man.  "Why would you want to hurt me I didn't do anything to you, and besides you would get caught anyway once my parents com find me dead here." said Kevin. "Shutup, you stupid boy or I will loose my patience and shoot you." said the man.  "You tell me to shutup, why don't you." said Kevin. "Thats it I've had it!" shouted the man. and he shot him right in the neck and back and head. "Kevin!" Kelli shouted.  Then she started to cry. Oh Kevin you were my best friend. Someone help! help! please help me. "Kelli call 911 and hurry please or Kevin is going to die." shouted Heather. So Kelli ran as fast as she could to try to get to the phone and call 911 but it was to late Kevin was dead. Heather could tell because he didn't have a pulse. So she started looking out the window wishing for a miracle to happen but nothing happened. Oh Kevin if I would of stould up to my brother this wouldn't of happened." said Kelli. "Hi were home." said Mrs. Johnson. Ahhh!! what happened...help, help!" shouted Mrs. Johnson. "Say one more thing and you get it too." said the man. "Kelli did you call 911?" asked Heather. "Yes, They said they would be here as soon as they could. said Kelli.

Suddenly they heard the sirens of the ambulence and the police. They started hoping that Kevin was alright but Heather couldn't stand it anymore.

 "Is he going to be alright?" asked Heather. "Yes, he is going to be fine in a few weeks," said the doctor.

Now Heather thought he was going to be fine, but the doctor had lied because he didn't want her to get upset. She didn't know that Kevin was lying dead right in front of her but he looked like he was sleeping. Kelli was still wandering if she should kill herself because she thought it was her fault that Kevin got shot.

"Good bye Heather I hope you miss me when I'm gone," said Kelli. "What do you mean good bye and miss you when your gone?" asked Heather. "Don't you know, it was my fault that Kevin got shot. If I would of stood up to Johnathan and Kevin wouldn't of got shot," said Kelli. "It is not your fault and still what do mean by good bye?" said Heather. "What I'm trying to say is since it was ny fault even though you don't think it is I am still going to kill myself and don't you try to stop because I have a gun and a knife right here with me," said Kelli. "Please don't I will miss you to much and so will Johnathan. "That makes me want to cry," said Heather.

Then suddenly Johnathan heard a loud scream and bang. Kelli had just killed Heather by stabbing her with a knife and shot herself in the chest where the heart is and Heather was there lying there with a knife in the middle of her heart. Then Johnathan started crying and he ran to the doctor and yelled help my sisters are dead. He kept on yelling that till the doctor came into that room.

"Are they going to be alright?" asked Johnathan. "I'm so sorry John but there boath almost dead they can talk so I would say your last words to them. Be quick they only have about two hours or less.," said the doctor. "Oh I wish you wouldn't of tried to killed yourself but the doctor said that you are going to get what you wanted, he said that you are going to die in two hours I wish you were going to be alright," said Johnathan. "Well it was my fault that Kevin was shot because it wasn't his time to die it was mine. Please don't miss me I have to leave you now I will miss you, well no I won't because I will be dead, good bye. Good bye Johnathan I love you."said Kelli "Kelli no Kelli oh it wasn't your time or your fault. How are you Heather, Heather no no," said Johnathan.

Suddenly there was a voice he could here it was Kelli's voice but she wasn't talking because she was dead. Johnathan heard the voice but he didn't really know where the voice was coming from.

 

"Johnathan, Johnathan I need your help. Please help me. I know I'm dead but I long for this last request, I want you to get the ghost powder from the ghost of Kevin. But hurry because he knows that you want it and he will do anything to stop you."said Kelli's voice. "Where are you coming from Kelli you are dead?" asked Johnathan.

Kelli didn't answer. So Johnathan went off in search of the ghost powder that Kelli wanted. He finaly found it and was about to grab it an he herd a loud scream for help. The voice he herd was Kelli's voice.

"Kelli what is it?" asked Johnathan.

Suddenly he saw the ghost of Kevin.

"What do you want Kevin" asked Johathan. "I want you to stop trying to get my ghost powder!" said Kevin. "Where Kelli's ghost?" asked Johnathan. "I killed her, she is no longer my friend. I decided that since she had no value to me that I would kill her ghost as well. Besides she was the one who let me die, she said so herself." said Kevin. "Is there anything I can do to take her place? I really liked her and now she can't even haunt me. said Johnathan. "Well there is something you can do you must preform a harsh but simple task. If you really want to know the task is this: first you must find the sharpest knife you have in this house then a pan. Heres what you must do with these two things. First you must take the sharp knife and cut a big whole on your chest right above your heart then put the skin you cut off in the pan. Then you must stab yourself in the heart then if you can survive that long cut all the veins that connect to your heart. "If this is realy the task I have to do than I'll do it!" said Johnathan.

Then he started to preform. All his friends heard a realy loud scream AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!! This enormously loud scream came from Johnathan.  Kevin then took a rope and tie it around Johnathan's neck and hung him on the coat rack. Blood dripped from his chest. Johnathan was amazingly still alive. Johnathan suddenly saw Heather. 

"Is it you Heather are you alive?" asked Johnathan. "Yes its me Johnathan. I am not the person I used to be Johnathan."said Heather. "I am dying Heather I will miss...you..." said Johnathan.

And a single tear rolled down Johnathan's cheek. Then suddenly all  the blood started comming back to Johnathan and then his heart was restored and he had no wounds or anything. He was completely healed.

"By the way I didn't tell you the other part of the preformance John. The other part is that you must die 10 times so the pain goes on and on for a long time." said Kevin. "So how must I die the second time?" asked Johnathan. "I must choke you to death." said kevin. Then with one yank of the rope Kevin started choking Johnathan. Johnathan couldn't breathe he was just hanging there with the knife in his hands. Johnathan suddenly heard a loud pop. It was his neck breaking.

"Kevin, why must i go through all this pain to save one person?" Johnathan cried. "Its no fun only dying once, and besides I brought Heather back to life to watch you be killed" Kevin laughed.

Kevin continued to kill Johnathan the rest of the time. Heather was screaming while she watched Johnathan die all ten times. By the tenth one was being finished Johnathan droped to the grownd dead. Heather was crying more than ever. She went over to Johnathan and took the knife that he had in his hands and tried to kill herself but Kevin wouldn't let her. Finally Heather gave up and said "We will all miss you Johnathan. We all loved you." Heather and Kelli and the rest of their friends watched as Kevin's ghost got rid of the body of Johnathan Johnson. Heather finally said to Kelli "I love you sis and I am glad to have you back."

ending so far soon a sequil maybe

Rachel's Poems (C) 2003                                                                       
                                                                     MY LIFE

My life was sweet

But not very neat

It was annoying

From peoples toying

I dreamed future events

When I was in my bed tent

Now lifes a bore

And not fun anymore

Now Im so busy

It makes me dissy

Now my friends are gone

So I listen to songs

Now I smoke

I do it so much it makes me choke

And my life was sweet

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

TEEN GIRLS

Cheer for the team

Like whip cream

Hair so straight

Love to date

Teen girls

Love to listen

Hate the dissen

Hate the fight

Like to write

Teen girls

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

LOVE

What is love

is it the caring

is it the liking

is it the sharing

is it the sikeing

What is love

is it the care you give

to the one on with you live

the house you share with

the one you like

the one you kiss

the one you hug

What is love

Is this love

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

STRANGE SOUND

Deep within the shallow moon

Is not a song yet a tune

You hear it when you are dreaming

You hear it when you are screaming

The sound you hear

Is always near

This is the sound of your very own fear

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

IN THE MIDDLE OF THE NIGHT

In the middle of the night

I come to you filled with fright

Because of the big bangs and light

From the gangsters that fight

When their done theyll get a bite

And thats what happped in the middle of the night

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

TO THE ONE I LOVE

Its hard to believe someone loves me

With all the rumors spreading rapidly

He is my love He is my friend

We will be together till the end

The one I love is so far away

And I only get to talk to him 2 times a day

When I go to bed at night

If Im scared he gives me the light

If I ever loose him

My life will surely be dark and dim

 

 

 

 

 

I STUMBLED ON THE PATH OF LIFE

I was once walking good

Till I came up against the hell wood

It seemed pretty far

And I hadnt yet a scar

I was making my way

Then I was betrayed

By the friends I have made

I got then was lost

Then came the frost

I was freezing to death

You could see my breath

I was almost dead

Then I saw ahead

The way out of hell

I was so happy I did yell

Now Im on my way

And its a brighter day

I am more happy

Because thats the way the path took me.

 

 

 

 

THE DANCE

We dance following every move tied to the music glancing at the floor not know wheather to back out so we ignore our thoughts deeply thinking now our eyes stuck to each others our love seeping out secretly telling the other

where did it go?

why did it go?

why?

loosing our love for everything else we dance we die slowly not being able to concentrate on anything else but on ourselves fading away dancing away with a last kiss we fall to the grownd

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Heart

What a heart for?

It is our minds not and endless

organs beating that tell us who to love

and wheather or not we care to love.

To love we say comes from the heart

But how could it?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

To Love

To love someone it takes time

You dont see it at first

But when you do you heart you mind

will surely burst

You think you love him

And he loves you

But is that really the truth

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

THE FRIEND I NEVER KNEW

I had a friend

We thought our relationship would never end

When he was here

He was always near

Away with the dawn

Now he is gone

Now Im so sad

And a little bit mad

From his last day

I will always say

I miss him

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

TEENAGERS

I see shallow teenagers

I see them become majors

In whatever they want to be

I know the look and saw

Said they did want to be like me

Its their teasing

Which I dont find pleasing

So I slowly drift to sleep

As another one goes to weap

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

MY FRIENDS

My friends are cool

Though Im a fool

I dont ever see

Why they would like me

Some left me and hurried

Then I was really worried

But theyll be back

Becasue were a pack

My friends are cool

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

SADNESS

Sadness is my friend

For it willl never end

She is where I turn to when Im in pain

I turn to her when Im shame

I turn to her at any part of the day

Why do you turn to such a low state of mind

I just turn and cry and leave them all behind

 

 

 

 

 

 

THANK YOU

Thank you for your love

Now I look at you from above

I see a tear in your eye

As you start to cry

I know it shouldnt of been me

Thats the way life should be

I still thank you for your love

Its been a year now

I still remember how

That happened to me

While you resqued my heart

And set me free

Thank you for you love

That you sent to heavan above

I miss you with all my heart

I wish our love could restart

I still thank you

For the good times we have had

Even when they were bad

I wish you a happy life Away from fear and strife thank you

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

FLYING WISH

I wish oh I wish I could fly

Fly beyond the farest stars

Even fly out to the planet Mars

Oh I wish I could fly

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

PEICE OF SHIT

That car looks like a peice of shit

I wonder how much you spent on it

You really ought to dump it in the dump pit

That car looks like a peice of shit

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

MR. LANDIS (DETICATED TO MR LANDIS)

He flew away like a dove

From the people he cares for

And the people he loves

Now he is gone

Though his spirit lives on

He was a good man

He was the number one Mav fan

Now he is in a better place

Wearing his gown of silk and lace

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

WHAT I SEE

Whad do I see

Looking at me

Its nor big nor small

And its not very beutiful at all

What I see

Is staring at me

I want to have fun

But I have to run

Because my faith I fore sake

Because its a snake

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

WHERE DO I GO

Where do I go

To see the wind blow

What will I see

When I know Im happy

Where do I go

To see all friends no foes

This place I will always love

It will be my fathers home in heavan above

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

TURMOIL

I see turmoil

In the land of foil

We use it to help us

Then we through it away

And with out a fuss

It says ok

The it comes back to fight

It breaks doors

It busts lights

Then it coils

And I sa what turmoil

 

 

 

 

 

WE CANT

Once was here

Now is gone

As though it faded away with the dawn

They used to have spirit and life

The died for their parents strife

They fought and fought

Though love was never tought

Its something you need

So you start to plead

Stop the fight

Bring in the light

Come on be friends

Before the world ends

Were gonna die

If ya dont try

We cant survive

Or even stay alive

Durring the fight

Durring the cold cold night

So please stop the fight

Let in the light

 

 

 

 

 

 

MARY(shmooh2)

The friend that got a new heart

The friend that got a new start

We all love her

We will forever

Till the end of time

She will be in my mind

As a very good friend

Thats kindness never will end

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Please understand that most of these poems that are on here I wrote as a young child around 10 so... They may not be all that good. But oh well. Thank you for understanding.