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    Poetry Archive Section # 4
    Total Poems (12)

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    Fans (W/Email) Poem Date
    45)Nick
    From:New Jersey

    A cloud in heaven


    I lean over to touch
    Your soft lips
    But you are not there.
    You did not escape
    With the
    Darkness of Night
    Nor
    The Light of Dawn.
    Woman
    Of my dreams
    Woman
    Of my nightmares
    I still kiss you
    Goodnight...


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    12/02/99
    46)Katie Setzer Kamphausen
    From: Los Angeles, CA

    Love Poem for a Woman


    Deep inside your caverns
    eyeless salamanders nose their way
    through honeycombed unconscious
    breath and claws scrabble sibilant
    on the banks of subterranean fires
    snapping their long tongues of creation
    in the shifting heaving
    lava of your essence
    Sometimes I see them
    burn out of unguarded eyes
    sometimes I feel them in an accidental
    brush of your volcanic skin
    and your words
    your ruby words
    spill ancient wisdom into my speechless hands

    my heart
    I am slave to your mountain
    your mystery


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    12/02/99
    47)Nick
    From: New Jersey

    Hey Mister, why do you look so sad?


    "Nick, where do you get your inspiration?"
    They ask.
    If I tell them they will cry
    Tears of acid burning their face.
    No, I didn't lose my one true love.
    Never had her...
    So much love in my heart,
    When I was born
    It was already broken.
    All I want is for my queen to come
    And put the pieces together.
    The avenger's queen, Shelly,
    was broken in front of His eyes.
    I envy those two...
    So, why do I look so sad you ask?
    Because all my love is making me fall,
    With no one there to catch me.


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    12/03/99
    48)Nick
    From: New Jersey

    There's Still...


    Yes.
    There still is true love to be found.
    People ridicule me.
    Think I am some kind of clown.
    Yes.
    There still are old sould that roam.
    Though they have been cast aside
    They keep laughing and smiling
    On their own.
    Yes.
    There still is a chance
    My pain will subside
    Sounds so good, but when I wrote this
    I cried...I cried...


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    12/06/99
    49)Victoria Herrera
    From:Los Angeles,CA

    One Side Of Me


    My soul is my grave,
    and my life is my sarrow.

    My heart is my brain,
    and my brain is confused.

    My feet are my warriors that keep me in the game.
    My hands are my experts that make sure things are OK.

    My entire being is on loan,
    and I'am alone.


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    12/12/99
    50)Emma Oxenby
    From:Staffanstorp, Sweden

    Thy Blood is My Blood


    For the blood you spilled long ago
    It is thy blood in these veins,
    Elongating the wait for my salvation.
    Is was thy eyes which haunted me
    In my lonely wooden chamber,
    Until I was set free.

    I saw the devil that day,
    Not at all as I had imagined.
    Like any man, just a man,
    But when he touched her
    I knew it to be true.

    I will walk through the
    Valley of the shadow of death
    And I will ascend to heaven.


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    12/15/99
    51)Meredith Fahey
    From: Boston, MA

    Crowess


    I am a crowess
    coming back from death
    for a second chance at love at revenge
    I am an infinite feeling of justice
    Righting the wrongs of the world
    in danger of losing the love
    I am an unbeatable guest
    from The Land of the Dead
    to conquer the impossible
    to be with the crow
    the savior of the dead


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    1/17/00
    52)Meredith Fahey
    From:Boston, MA

    Brandon


    Brandon, you knew that life was precious
    and that is why yours was taken
    so very few hold that knowledge
    that you needed to show others
    There was irony in the movie
    that shined through your soul
    like a beacon to us all
    a love that only losing memories is lost
    Draven is the counterpart
    we associate you with
    A lover, a warrior, a peacemaker
    a little piece of us all


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    Total Poems

    52



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    53)Little Phoenix
    From:London,England

    Dying For Brandon


    Bleeding on the floor, I cry in you're pain
    Upon the broken glass I lie
    My shadow is low with so much time to go
    Untill my dieing day
    I'm surrounded by night
    My sorrow takes flight
    Where all the dark angels play
    I pick up a blade
    Twist in my vain
    and gasp for the heavenly air
    I sit
    I wait
    For He has heard my drowning
    And will come home to me
    For love, forever


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    2/02/00
    54)Shawn Saunders
    From:Eden, Maryland

    Quenched Thirst.


    Although only dull, the flame still burns
    Lighting up the night.
    No tear can quench nor fear susbside
    The vengence that has taken flight.
    Upon the window pane sat death
    And upon his shoulder was the crow.
    And in his eyes, those darkest pits,
    Suffering was the only show.
    When justice calls, it understands only one thing...
    And that thing is righting sins.
    When the juggernaut is set in motion, don't stop him,
    He always wins.
    And the tears that fell upon the cheeks
    Of those who sorrow flood
    Shall no longer be thirsty,
    For their flame is quenched on blood.


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    2/10/00
    55)Jayde Ising
    From:Dallas,Texas

    Remembered As a Nightmare...Forgotten Just as Quickly


    ....My Mind.....

    Lost in cavers of confusion
    Stuck forever exploring the past
    Not knowing the truth from an illusion
    The bad memories seem to last
    Inside the halls of depression
    Drifting through nightmares long dead
    Not exactly a great first impression
    Of whats going on in my head
    ~*^Me^*~


    My Black Heart
    My Black heart is filled with sorrow
    Filled with thoughts of lost tomorrow
    Tomorrow I shall hunt and Kill
    Kill my victims,with savage will

    My Black blood flows through my veins
    I shed a tear for those I've slain
    Tonight,I wish upon a star
    My victim,I wonder where you are

    My Black soul has long since departed
    Your metamorphasis has already started
    I must kill you before you change
    I know you find this a little strange
    My black eyes make you run with fear
    For you see,I am a vampire my dear....

    Just a bunch of "ations"

    Hallucination of "Gods" creation
    Masturbation of your imagination
    Penetration of this generation
    Depravation,your fascination
    Glorification of an inbred nation
    Regurgitation of a revalation
    Implication to the abomination
    Amplification of the investigation
    Complication of incrowd elevation
    Classification of human animation
    Anticipation of their damnation
    Validation of no relation
    Great elation over a permanent
    vacation
    Adoptation of your incrypted station
    Aggravation throughout your dictation
    Speculation of an emanation
    Complication is your destination
    ~**Me**~


    Always Yet Never
    Always Wrong
    Never Right
    Always Alone
    Never Loved
    Always Crying
    Never Happy
    Always Screaming
    Never Heard
    Always Ignored
    Never seen
    Always Forgotten
    Never Was
    Always Nothing
    Never Someone
    Always Me
    Never You
    ~*^Me^*~


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    2/24/00
    56)Fallen Angel
    From:Seatle

    Reaper


    Caw goes the bird in my dreams,
    it has come to kill me, or so it seems.
    While I cry into the night,
    It continues its paroless flight.

    Caw goes my reaper,
    I swear it it is a creeper!
    Is it made of pure hate,
    Or do I just light to debate?

    Caw goes the raven,
    Mentor of a man name Draven.
    It is a guide from far beyond,
    enforcing justice with a pawn.


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    2/26/00
    57)pat nelson
    From:new york

    Untitled


    LIFE IS A FRAGILE PRETTY LITTLE FLOWER THAT WITHERS AWAY AND DIES.
    IN THE END ALL WE HAVE IS A DECLINING FEELING OF SELF WORTH.
    A MISPLACE SIGNFICANCE ON HOPE AND LIFE
    ND ONLY ONE LONELY WAY OUT
    IN OUR EVER FADING WORLD


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    2/26/00

    Total Poems

    57

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